All Comments on 'Homecoming Bath'

by Hikergirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
EROTICISM AT ITS BEST!!!

Love the IM format...it adds to the anticipation and build-up.

This one left me hot and wanting more. Keep them coming!

BalgroggyBalgroggyover 17 years ago
Bravo

Amazingly erotic Hiker! I can't wait for the other stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Effective Eroticism

This is eroticism at its best. I masturbated four times before getting through the story. The author must either have a tremendous imagination or was truly inspired--or both!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Super eroticism

This was very aroulsing. Very satisfying. I hope to see more from hikergirl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Highly erotic!

Very well written, controlled and paced. Highly erotic to read and to visualise, thank you, hope that you write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very erotic!!

Very erotic Hikergirl!! Would love to see you write more

- Researcher

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You are an erotic inspiration!

This was really different from the run of the mill erotic writing. A friend referred me to it and I am glad she did. The way you instructed the reader to read it and absorb it line by line made the story build in anticipation. I came twice and am still wet thinking about it.

Please, write more.

peacekeeper25peacekeeper25over 17 years ago
wonderfully erotic-- the best kind

hot and tender loving, sensual honest and very erotic.

deepviocematuredeepviocematureabout 17 years ago
sensuality for adults.

Felt the waters warmth, and could breath in the scents. A slow build that painted nice, sensual, pictures in my mind.

Looking forward to trying some snorkaling of my own.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Gave me some ideas for what to do to my hubby!

Sensuality IS for adults...Wow, that was a wonderful breath of fresh air. Thank you for inspiring me to borrow a few of your ideas as a surprise for my husband.

BenLongBenLongover 14 years ago
Good Stuff

Great stuff HG. Very enjoyable read.

Still_meStill_meover 8 years ago
Write more!

I just came across (pun intended) your bath story and loved it it! Please write more!

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