by Hikergirl
Love the IM format...it adds to the anticipation and build-up.
This one left me hot and wanting more. Keep them coming!
This is eroticism at its best. I masturbated four times before getting through the story. The author must either have a tremendous imagination or was truly inspired--or both!!
This was very aroulsing. Very satisfying. I hope to see more from hikergirl.
Very well written, controlled and paced. Highly erotic to read and to visualise, thank you, hope that you write some more.
Very erotic Hikergirl!! Would love to see you write more
- Researcher
This was really different from the run of the mill erotic writing. A friend referred me to it and I am glad she did. The way you instructed the reader to read it and absorb it line by line made the story build in anticipation. I came twice and am still wet thinking about it.
Please, write more.
hot and tender loving, sensual honest and very erotic.
Felt the waters warmth, and could breath in the scents. A slow build that painted nice, sensual, pictures in my mind.
Looking forward to trying some snorkaling of my own.
Sensuality IS for adults...Wow, that was a wonderful breath of fresh air. Thank you for inspiring me to borrow a few of your ideas as a surprise for my husband.
I just came across (pun intended) your bath story and loved it it! Please write more!