by busty_fucker
This is just getting better and better... Thank you so much for such a wonderful story...
I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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Lisa
We need more chapters fast please please please now
Total abandonment of propriety and common decency. A wonderful story! Kept me hot all the way through. I hope you continue this delightful tale.
Chapters 4 & 5 please. Don't leave us hanging.
Great writing and editing.
Mind blowingly hot. Wish there had been more mother/daughter action instead of just that little bit in the kitchen. Can't wait to read chapter 4!!
was a bit on the unbelievable side, but the resulting seduction was very hot. Looking forward to a wild conclusion of this story.
Just got about 1/2 way through page 2 of this chapter, cannot read any more...
This story has devolved into trashy nothingness...it does not resemble the lines at the start of it...Randy, by my reckoning, was supposed to be the focus of the story...
Instead, all this other crap dogs the whole thing up...confusing/blurring the lines...not worth reading any more of it...
And..A One-Star rating to boot!!!!