All Comments on 'Homeless'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 2 months ago

Wonderful!

Cries for an epilog, though ... what happened, next?

LitCritLitCritabout 2 months ago

Good first chapter, but, like Monagamous_Now asked, what's next? I could see this going for several more chapters - we've still got her backstory to hear, he obviously has a backstory to tell also - I'm aboard for more. Thanks.

CriosCriosabout 2 months ago

Quite a departure from your usual stories. "Brad" finally gets some hetero LOL! Fun, poignant story! Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Nice feel good story.

DarkGod33DarkGod33about 2 months ago

Really really well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Next. Keep this up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Sounds like they both got what they want. There is no mention of birth control, so she may present her future husband with a new name- daddy!

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Just me being me. And work.... lots and lots of working. I welcome comments and future story arc ideas or new premises. Let me know what you think.