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All Comments on 'Honor Thy Mother & Thy Father Ch. 05'

by Prolonged_Debut10

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arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Addicting!!!!!!!!

Can't get enough...on to the next chapter!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
A very good chapter!

So much detail! It bounces around a bit, break lines would be great for web postings... I'm really enjoying this novella, you really did great on this... On we go... :D

deJay_13deJay_13over 6 years ago
Please

Please get a good proofreader and grammarian to make an otherwise excellent story much more readable. It will make me change a three or four star grade into a strong FIVE star!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Relationship

Since Jemma is the wife of Patricia’s father, she is Patricia’s stepmother, not her mother-in-law.

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