All Comments on 'Horny Little Women Ch. 02'

This story has been great and has sooo much room to grow. Keep up the good work!

loving the story so far, cant wait for the new chapters!!!

An outstanding story with obviously tremendous potential for a young man. He should be able to have them all.

Thought your 2nd Chapter was better than your first, although I still not some spelling mistakes and punctuation & spacing errors. Perhaps an editor? They're minor enough that they could be easily caught. Keep going.

designed to make readers look

for the next in the series,

very TV episode style!

This was fucking terrific. Matthew's adventures with Beth and Jo were wonderfully erotic, far better than the earlier chapter. The way you portrayed his fucking of Jo was great. I wanted my cock in her pussy as I read it.

Nookiehunter

Seems like things are getting very heated in the March household. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I loved this chapter. The story goes its way and it's more and more exciting.

mid morning (midmorning)

supped (sipped)

lot to answer to (for)

fare (selection)

bought fr her (for)

feint aroma (faint)

rhapsody (ecstacy)

QUICKLY brought Beth QUICKLY

counter top (countertop)

treacled frenzy (NONSENSE!!!!)

long lost (long-lost)

cup (-one) Matthew's left buttock

Venus Fly-trap (Venus flytrap)

about spelling or grammar. Everyone , but your sorry ass, wants to read and enjoy while masturbating. You're the only dumb fucker on this earth that looks for errors!! Jesus get a fucking life. I gave this a 5 for the fucking errots!!!

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

LOL LOL LOL The whore who lives on Lit tells others to get a life!!! LOL LOL LOL

I don't give a fuck about the spelling or grammar, for me it's a great story and getting better with each chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.. 5 stars from this poor illiterate uneducated bastard....

Beloved Author

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Actually 7, or better yet ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

A ten star THRILLER!!