All Comments on 'Horny Little Women Ch. 04'

by mpqm1968

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
your've talent and your writings are fun and sexy

give us more of your writings and keep the good stories coming.this don't have to be the end,the girls have friends.

kakarotkakarotover 17 years ago
Say it aint so!

This is such an awesome story, please reconsider writing more chapters instead of ending it at just 5. If not at, least leave where you can continue it some were in the future.

NookiehunterNookiehunterover 17 years ago
One In The Rack and One In The Closet!

The story of Matthew fucking Meg was great, but add to that the virgin, Amy, watching them and masturbating herself to an orgasm, this chapter went over the top. I loved it.

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Bye...

Perfect setup, but sorry, piercings turn me off completely.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
Only one to go!

This is a very hot series. He has came inside each female save one. I have a feeling that will be Amy's TRUE present.

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
AWJWARD, BRITTLE, CLUMSY WRITING - GET HELP!!!!

the whole each nipple (UNCLEAR - POORLY WRITTEN!!!!) (hole in)

mind blowing (mind-blowing)

vitreous ooze (GOD-AWFULLY UNPLEASANT AND INDECIPHERABLE IMAGE!!!!)

blurr (blur)

petalling (NOT A VERB, NOT A WORD!!!!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Ah, I see the uneducated spelling nazi is back again below, not even bothering to proofread his own angry drivel, lol. What's with all the hate and anger anyway??

....anyway, hoping that dear brother will have enough common sense to just hire someone to close up his house and affairs in Manilla and move in with the girls! :). Looking forward to Amy's Big Birthday Present! ;)

Anonymous
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