All Comments on 'Horny Siblings'

Great start! Hope this story continues. Good to see you back, your to good of a writer to simply disappear forever.

Quick question though, are you going to finish Katy's Smell, or has that reached it's cliffhanger ending?

Thanks.

Hot n sexy, glad to see you writing again. I hope you plan to keep going with this story and brooke is happy to join in.

Loved it more please

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Very hot!

I tried to read it, but the lead-in was just too fantastical for me to buy into the rest. Stopped mid-way, no score given.

Nice to read a polished story.

Good premise.

Sex is rushed. Needs much more preliminaries/foreplay.

Three stars.

Looking forward to bringing Brooke into the mix

Good to see you writing again. Welcome back. You are too good of a writer to lose.

Good start with the story. Now the siblings will have to bring in Muriel and Brooke in the fun to be one big happy family. There is so much potential here. I really hope we will get a sequel for this.

Contrary to what some of the naysayers in the comment section, this story's premise is just fine. Let the negative dickheads go read something else.

Cheers

Another absolute winner. Been reading you for years and you never disappoint.

No notes, FANTASTIC story.

Though I haven’t any sisters, I’ve often thought that sibling sex would be the safest sex, and certainly, at some level, caring sex. Great story—-please continue

Great story glad ur back writting can't wait to read more of this as you continue it

Great to see you back! good story can’t wait for the rest of it.

Great to see you back! good story can’t wait for the rest of it.

As the rest have said great to see you back , and really hoping that once you finish this story you’ll finish all the rest you left hanging

I enjoyed that first time out after 6or 7 years ! Hope I don't have to wait so long for part two. Good fun.

So want to see a second chapter for Wood nymph :) glad to see you back

Terrible dialogue. What little context is given does not make up for the completely bizarre relationship the siblings have from the very beginning. I understand this is a fantasy, but this is too far removed from reality to be arousing.

Thanks everyone for your comments, even the negative ones. I do pay attention to them!

Keep an eye out for some very late conclusions to my other stories...

i lovd it so much. thank you

Slightly odd take on the "liberal" attitude but hey this is fantasy so it's your world & rules :)

Enjoyed it and would love to read a follow up / conclusion.....

Many thanks for sharing with us all

Another great story. Please continue.

more please fantastic story...i am prepared to beg!

Not an ounce of reality...

Voted 2....

Wish my family was more like this

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Man I really enjoyed this story. It was really hot! Public naughtiness really is a great turnon. What a fantasy. Please write more adding the other sibling.

Good story what a bout Brooke when will you add her?