All Comments on 'Horsing Around'

Perhaps a continuation can be made on this one where they continue their experiences in the breeding pen, but unknown to him, his low sperm condition changes and she becomes pregnant? By that time it is too late and she stays on with her daddy and becomes an ongoing Mommy?

Good story; the characters were believable and the plot twists were neat! Thanks.

This was a Great Story. I loved it.

Hope you will more chapters to it.

You really got me going! It was beautifully written! I want to read more of your stories!

Very , very hot..Nice seeing a man's point of view....

Very nicely written. Wonderful story. :)

One hell of a great story both from the action and the subtle interchage between them. From what was said, or maybe not said, I had the feeling until nearly the end,that John was in fact her father. If you did that to me on purpose, then you are even a better author.

Yeah - that was so good.

Please do consider a follow-on.

Lukas

Terrific story. Reminded me of my Uncle's ranch...good clean living and sometimes a good roll in the hay!

I loved this! please do more!!!!!!!! so sexy.

Thanks for some WAY HOT JUICY SEX! Now hand me a bandana. The characters are pretty well developed, but still just caricatures of real people -- lusty animals in heat. You could have drawn them better. Still and all, HOT DAMN!

Any chance of a second part to this story? I loved how you had Gail bred just like the mare was. Any way Jack could come over and breed me? Damn that was hott!! :p

Excellent!!!!! Hot!!!!!!

Nothing like a stallion with a big dick doing his best to breed a mare in heat to inspire a needy girl and a hot guy. And they sure did enjoy their time in the stud barn too - and I enjoyed reading about it.

Nice story! I loved the part about her mother lying about having sex with him. Hee hee!

I love how you carried the theme of the horses breeding through to the way the main characters made love. Very, very sexy!

much ambiguity and misdirection along the way. some of it was humourous, some of it was deceptive.

gotta watch out for those little big men.

Gotta love a man who knows how to "make love", whether it's a long, fat hose or a short, skinney one! Thanks for a wonderful read! I would love to read more.

I wanted her to get with the horse.

This story brought back a lot of memories for me...I ran a boarding stables quite a few years ago... Women who like messing around with horses can be a horny bunch.. and watching the breeding process can set them off sometimes..., especially among some of the "younger" ones...

Keep writing..

I'm 69 and until recently I had never heard about stud horses smelling women's periods. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading the next part. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.