All Comments on 'Hot and Dry'

Great use of atmosphere. Really made me feel her relief...

This was well done, and I could actually see it happening. It had good detail and no pretensions, strictly a stroke story and a good one.

I loved the way you let the tension build, kept us waiting the way ur characters waited for the rain, and finally drenched us in detail. I thoroughly enjoyed it ;) good job

Nice arousing buildup of tension, tantalising climax...

niiiice. i love sex in the rain and you wrote about it so well. Thanks!

Very sexy.

I loved the originality of this story and it made me recall how sexy and erotic stories can be with water as a theme--lakes, the ocean, a pool---skinnydipping, voyeurism, etc. I think you would really be able to apply your writing skills to stories like these! Please consider it :-)