All Comments on 'Hot and Horny - An Incest Comedy'

by Moonburns

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BilleyedBilleyedover 2 years ago

Insane runaway fantasy! Here is where the writer ejaculates!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow. It's different but it shows a weird sense of fantasy.

Welcome aboard, read a few more of other peoples stories before writing part 2.

I'll give a 5* for the effort of penning your fantasy but I suspect it may be the one and only.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved the story! Being involved with incest for a number of years I had never envisioned such a combination of family love acts. I would love to have a family situation like this so I could test out my theory that when having sex with mom it provides a stronger organism than when having it with a non-family member.

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOneover 2 years ago

A little contrived as a story. But short, sweet and to the point. A decent read for those just starting out in the genre. Look forward to reading more of your thoughts.

sexymeupsexymeupover 2 years ago

I read both of your stories, you should really stop writing and posting this shit wasting readers' time, you have failed as a writer, I hope you have another job, another one star and it was too much also.

lovedefactolovedefactoover 2 years ago

Good start! If I may suggest don't have so many plots in such a short story. Keep trying though. You have some interesting ideas.

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