by Moonburns
Wow. It's different but it shows a weird sense of fantasy.
Welcome aboard, read a few more of other peoples stories before writing part 2.
I'll give a 5* for the effort of penning your fantasy but I suspect it may be the one and only.
I loved the story! Being involved with incest for a number of years I had never envisioned such a combination of family love acts. I would love to have a family situation like this so I could test out my theory that when having sex with mom it provides a stronger organism than when having it with a non-family member.
A little contrived as a story. But short, sweet and to the point. A decent read for those just starting out in the genre. Look forward to reading more of your thoughts.
I read both of your stories, you should really stop writing and posting this shit wasting readers' time, you have failed as a writer, I hope you have another job, another one star and it was too much also.
Good start! If I may suggest don't have so many plots in such a short story. Keep trying though. You have some interesting ideas.