All Comments on 'Hot New Roommate Saga Continues'

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toobytoobyover 4 years ago
Hot!

I loved your story and it's length was perfect! Canada sounds like fun! The innocence/nastiness mix was so sexy :)

Rapier875Rapier875almost 4 years ago
WoW ! Now that's what call a sequel !

If only girls like Alex really existed. You'd die a very happy man.

My only gripe is the similarity in names between Alex and Amber. So many authors keep using the same initial, it makes following the characters difficult at times. With so many girls names to choose from, please pick ones with different initials ! But at least Mike and Tom were easy to distinguish between.

Otherwise well worth 10 Stars if it were possible.

Any chance of you writing another episode, please !

Rapier

hectarehectareabout 3 years ago

I enjoyed the story, and I know it's fiction, but the amount of booze consumed from arrival at the hotel until the end of the night would have everyone drunk off their asses not having sex. I'm not complaining really but grabbing another beer every 5 minutes distracted me from the sex.

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