by kandie
What an erotic scenario! Two couples into a 4-person marriage that develops into a 6-person marriage, fucking and having fun in the nude with each other. Perhaps some pregnancies can also develop in a future additional chapter on this scenario, where the women don't really know who the "daddy" is, and could care less?
Hey grammarboy.This a sex story for enjoyment.What are you,a freaking english professor?Why don't you just back off?
Kandie,
Spelling, Spelling, Spelling,
Grammer, Grammer, Grammer,
If those guys don't shut up,
I'll hit them with my Hammer!
I think you did a good job on a group sex story.
This isn't romance or loving wives.
keep writing
Nothing like the hot session of Kandie! Keep them cumin like this one!
We are a couple who loves to read your stories here on Literotica. Honey, please pay no mind to those leaving rude remarks about this story. If they do not like it at least they can be adult enough to leave you a short sweet note, instead of rude one. After all this is not a English literature class at your local college. It a place where people post stories just for pleasure. Keep them stories coming doll. J&J from Indiana.
I liked it very much. Group sex of 6 - 10 people is ok, 'cause they probably know each other and can be regarded as "safe". Such fucking should always be bareback. I agree that a pregnancy here and there could spice up things. How about a black couple to really spice up thinmgs? Keep fucking and keep writing.
I enjoyed it very much. You write about what people want to do if given the freedom. Its nice to know that there are people who like to get out of the regular rut of life. Keep on writing.
Would have been higher if the spelling and grammar were better. Those errors kept me from enjoying the story.