All Comments on 'Hot Tub Fun'

Man!! ThatBoi21 always comes through

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

I enjoyed this story - as well as all your other stories.

Thanks for taking the time to write them.

Good premise.

Wasn't fond of the use of the present tense, though.

Too much emphasis/discussion about how big his cock is.

Why, when he's fucking her doggy-style, doesn't he reach her breasts and play with them?

And why doesn't he finger her clit while he's fucking her?

And he's loving her ass. But nothing? He doesn't kiss it. He doesn't touch her asshole.

Four stars.

Welcome back, brother

Sorry; a few mistakes ("f--- in" instead of "f--- it") that just made sentences make no sense, or I knew what you meant; but later on, stuff that you couldn't make sense of ("...her my her...").

Mature women are heaven-sent when it comes to good sex. They know how to make it last, anticipating more warm cum will fill their pussy.

Fun and games!

4

Just another cheating slut. Hope the husband finds out, kicks the sluts ass to the curb and just kicks the kids ass as a lesson to not fuck with someone else's shit.

Super hot story!!!! 🔥 🔥

****Hot read. Thanks for sharing.

I'm surprised that, at his age, finally having the woman of his dreams, he could fuck her only once.

This is a good story, and is well written. The development of the major characters is just right. The drunk parents and loser husband are appropriately undeveloped, allowing us to focus on the incredibly hot and sexy woman and her young stud. I would love to have this fantasy story become real for me! Please right more about these two.

Fantastic as always 10/10. Thank you!

Really liked it - and so much scope for sexy outfits....

She seemed keen on the heels; that'd be a great direction. Dolling up and going out somewhere public

Great story

Build up good and sex scenes were vivid. I liked the finish or Cummings together could of had a few more paragraphs but think we could have a ch 2+, maybe mom being, "up" and watching, getting a view of her friends sexual side, or neighbor watching and have a little blackmail or revenge storylines 5* keep up the good work

"I'm about four inches soft, getting to a max of seven when I'm hard."

Everyone who brags, lies.

Long-winded. Nothing original.