All Comments on 'Hot Tub Trio Ch. 08'

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TurbidusTurbidusalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks to LarryInSeattle

My intro thanking LarryInSeattle for his editing help was cut off.

So, thank you LarryInSeattle. Any remaining error are mine alone.

StubbyoneStubbyone6 months ago

While the writing was good, it was a bit confusing intermixing the run with the memory of sex with Ann. This technique can be tricky and was not completely effective here. Still a good offering. 4-😊😊😊😊’s

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