by amofiga
This whole chapter could have been left out with no loss to the plot.
A simple sentence,
"I went to Dr. Jeff and [anticipating what I expect in the next chapter] when the test results came back negative, I was cleared for action,"
could have replaced this chapter.
The business trip and masturbation (which I mostly skipped) were filler that could (should) have been deleted.
Story is toooo verbose.
Paul in Oklahoma