by Doctor_Tease
I really like this story read whole thing in 2 hours. think it would be better in noncon though other then that please keep the chapters coming
Twisted, but extremely hot. You're very creative!
This was always one of those stories I loved so much and was sad to see that it hadn't been continued. Thank you. Wow. I like the equipment, but I like your descriptions of her reactions and thoughts even better. Please don't make us wait years for the next chapter! 5 stars.
words cannot express how happy I am that you have returned to Literotica!! This was always one of my favorite stories that I thought would tragically end up incomplete but now we'll be able to read what happens next and there will closure hooray! This was, as usual, another really hot chapter and pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase write more quickly!! Also please pleas please finish up Enhanced Interrogation as well, I love the collaboration between you and greysequioa, if for some reason u guys r out of touch now or wutevs i would encourage u to just go ahead and finish it up urself. it would be totally amazing and mindblowing Thank you.
Oh my goodness, please keep this story going! I started reading this chapter with my hitachi set on low, and came by the end of the fourth paragraph. You have written something incredible and I hope it continues sooon soon soon.
I like your story a lot, and appreciate you coming back to it after some time. You do a great job of developing characters - it's just enough to keep things from being a touch too clinical for me to enjoy it. The machines are innovative, frightening, and of course hot. Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Found this story along ago, and remember it fondly for pushing all the right buttons. I was surprised when I came upon this chapter. I had given up hope for a continuation.
Hope you continue to do so.
~Harlequin
It's been a while since I've felt I've come across an exceptional story, but this is it. I am still feeling particularly entranced by the word Hadi.... I find it to be so exotic and erotic. I was playing with myself as I was reading the story and quite honestly - when Katie first came upon hearing Hadi, so did I. Definitely made the story even more personal :) As I'm coming down from the who-knows-which orgasm, I don't have much words, except that your writing and your mind are wondrous. And that I will be keeping Hadi in mind... :)
I really like this one, though I have no interest in the orgasm or fancy machines, what I like best about your story is the way you describe how the kidnapped girls fighting spirit is broken down and made to submit to him. if it where my kind of story, it would go on and on untill the poor girls accept their places as part of his slave harem. either way, if you lay off the machines or even have no sex in various chapters, you wont drive me away at all. its the character development i love.
I hope you continue this story. I would like to see Katie break. The idea of edging is awesome
Love this story, had given up hope of continuation so stopped checking. Can't wait for ch 7. Would love to see involvement of the other girls in coming lessons.
I keep coming back to read this series again and again. I can't get enough.
Please keep my orgasms coming. I love this so much and am always soaking wet after the first few sentences!!
I hate cliff hangers! I want to know what happens next. I realize it's been a few years but maybe you could revisit this story ? it is very twisted but your descriptions make it a great read.
Christ, I was basically edging while reading this. I'm aroused beyond a level I thought I had. What an amazing story.
Love this whole series! You write well and these machines are the stuff of dreams (and nightmares!).