All Comments on 'Housewife Bimbo Ch. 07'

Why not have Bugs Bunny and Elmer Fudd show just to complete the ensemble. This just gets more and more ridiculous and the chapters progress.

Love this story!You have a great imagination, don't stop here. 5

Wish you would continue the story.

good premise: a housewife hypnotized to be a bimbo remains trapped inside the bimbo's body and personality and so we get two points of view, hers and the bimbo. Unfortunately there is also a lot of lazy plotting: (1) Husband flies to resort intended to be sexy vacation with wife without wife, (2) stays at resort for a week without wife, doesn't fly home, doesn't call police, and (3) passes wife around town where someone is eventually going to recognize her.

... maybe an earlier comment about an "uneven" plot hit too close to home to continue - or the author run out of ideas and energy and just started anew with another project.

. Anyway, it was fun to read about the erotic and humiliating games. Entertaining style patched over plot weaknesses for me. Though, while its easy to complain it's considerably more difficult to do better (I couldn't, for sure). So thanks for the 7 chapters of light entertainment and all the best for You - hopefully more stories are arrive at LIT in future ;-)

great story but time to un hypnotice her its dragging on a bit now and she has suffered enough poor bitch