All Comments on 'How Diana Overcame Her Shyness Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
I don’t want to sound cliched but seriously WOW! Brilliant!!

That is a truly magnificent piece of writing, utterly breathtaking you captured absolutely everything she was feeling. I’ve probably said it before but with a writing ability like this you should consider publishing if you haven’t already done so.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

JackobinJackobinabout 3 years ago
As Diana would say...

"W-wow!"

Very touching. I'm looking forward to the further chapters. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is exactly how it went with me in high school with an older more experienced college boy. More guys need to realize that if they smile gently and kiss shy nerds on the forehead they'll melt us like butter and have a willing slave forever. Great story. Really brings me back haha!

JIMSVANOJIMSVANOover 1 year ago

Excellent, well written

KateAYoungKateAYoung8 months ago

Has been a few years since anyone commented on this story, but WOW if anything it gets better with age :) Kate

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