All Comments on 'How Far We've Come'

I really liked this story. Quite different from nigh-all the other ones in the mind control section. Thank You. It was beautiful

You've brought a new (to me, at least!) perspective to mind-fuckery. I love it!

This was really sweet in a strange and twisted way. I just wish there was a little more into Martine's emotion about Zoe.

This is one of your stories that's great, not just as erotica, but as a character study. Martine is so delightfully twisted and pitiable, this girl to whom ethics barely even occur when she gets the idea that starts out noble: The idea to protect her best friend from her bad thoughts.