by bradley_stoke
I really appreciated the subject matter of jazz music in this story. There was a unique relation between Lynn's growing lust for an admirer and the way her night on stage progressed. We also get a healthy dose into Lynn's history, which makes me care about her more.
However, I must say that I feel that this story is unfinished. To me, it ended abruptly and at a critical point. If there are to be other chapters than this is great, as I will be looking forward to them. However, if this is a stand-alone story, I feel a bit cheated.