All Comments on 'How My Daddy Made Me...Ch. 01'

Takes me back to High School. Again, great writing. I'll be reading more. Keep writing.

Ive read alot of stories here but never commented before. THIS WAS AMAZING, keep it going!!

Drawing it out far too long with unnecessary stuff.

Has Great potential, but all the many long paragraphs before even the tree scene is too much, too long.

It may be long, but it's a nice story with a nice pace. You don't have to read it if you don't like long stories.

Hotttt as fuck!!!!

Hardly.

Some of your works don't pique my interest, but of those that I've read you keep a good pace.

Good job!

That was superb. Loved every bit of the story