All Comments on 'How Sadie Became a Cowgirl'

... as Teflon Tony might have said! What a story - thank you.

Quite an imaginative tale.

What a unique and hot tale. Well done.

This was a great story line and I would like to see that the author continue to see where this would go. I would like to see how many Cowgirls he could get without doing too much recruiting. Great Story.

I hope there are more chapters as Erica begins producing milk. I hope Ryan adds more girls to fill up the apartment. Sadie becoming pregnant would be a nice addition. Great story.

good job

Any more chapters coming?

I really liked it and hope to see more on the cow theme

Hi I love your stories, all of them, you're my favorite author here.

Kaethe the cowgirl

I have beat off to this story 3x I need more

My husband and I read this together as we played. Induced and producing for three months with only two teats and 18oz a day, but ... Mooooo

Loved it.

This is really wrong and should have not been put up at all. It like the women don't have say and they are a object for the guy.

This story earns a rare five stars from me. Strongly agree with Bumpman's suggestions. Look forward to reading more about Sadie, Ryan, Erica and a stable of cowgirls.

Looking forward to reading more, Nice work!

I agree. We really want more of this story and this world.

Nice one

Swallowing pills, eating porridge, drinking loads. But still no milk as I massage my breasts to this story. Can't wait to read more hucow lactation stories from you, really informative, helpful even, makes me feel like its the easiest thing in the world to get injected, grow bigger and then milk. All I need is a vet!

i liked the story alot, hope you continue the series

I just posted a comment on "Lily's life as a livestock" and, while it's true I enjoyed this story, this one is without a doubt your best work. The mental and physical transformation is well rendered and progressive, yet very sexy.

Great job.

Since I am a male human, I loved this story.

If Ryan would build me a stall, I would love to submit to him!

And since he is into maiesiophilia, I would love for him to keep my permanently knocked up!

SandiCow

I would simply love to suckle on a women's breast - great story

And this is perhaps the ultimate breast story! I doubt this will ever be surpassed.

Dear author,

I take my hat off to you! "How Sadie Became a Cowgirl" was very entertainingly written even though the plot was, objectively speaking, relying on a pretty dull and barebones premiss that has already been done quite a lot. It's all the more impressive considering how you managed to keep this story fresh and entertaining. You have hit the perfect middle ground in so many instances:

- not just introducing things willy-nilly but giving the reader time to get accoustomed to the new circumstance(s) and to properly savor them

- simultaniously not droning on and on preventing the narration from becoming boring, repetitive or even a drag

- the constant insight into Sadie's psyche, coupled with the fact that most of her thoughts are not just put out there but explained if needed, together with her very legitimate, very understandable fears/worries, makes her very relateable to the point of actually feeling like a living, breathing human and not just fictional character [enter name here]

- as indicated beforehand I praised the pace you chose for this story and that praise extends to the scenes of the more erotic nature as well; while they are very elaborate and fleshed out in the beginning they noticeably shrink in detail when (pure) repetition is involved so they don't become dull

- the time skips, though they may have been vage at times on just how much time actually passed/got skipped (which is not a bad thing btw. as it reflects the main character's increasing unwillingness to care about it herself), were expertely placed and served to cut a lot of unnecessary fluff

- mirroring the wounderful pacing, the lengh is perfect as well as the story gives us relatively much to chew on but ends right before it has a chance to truly turn out monotonous

And I gladly would have given you the full five stars if it would have been only for the occasional misspelling or odd formulation, but there are quite a few other stepping stones that you tripped over, which are:

- on occasion you seem to have confused or lost track of the current position and current actions of your characters (admittedly a minor thing, since I only recall one instance where you wrote that Ryan is carassing Sadie's hair only to state in the very next line, that (both of) his hands are on her breasts - a small oversight that could have been sidestepped by describing how his hand moved to her chest) - still, this is a very reoccuring theme amongst the lesser stories on this site and you are by no means a large offender

- as mentioned before the occasional grammar and spelling mistakes are a thing; I won't keep harping on them as it is evident that you did proofread your text; but again, if they were the only negative thing I wouldn't be writing this

- the lack of insight into Ryan's psyche makes it difficult to understand just how he went from the carefree fool who readily exposes his girlfriend to materials with serious biohazardous potential to this competent, dominating caretaker that has usually everything under his control; what irks me the most, is that the shift doesn't feel as gradual as it should be and instead feels rather sudden, like somebody just flicked a switch and thus changed his personality; now I understand that a constant shift between viewpoints can be difficult to pull off but I think that the story would have benefited, if we have had access to his input on things slightly more often; a good example for shifting perspectives done right is this story: http://www.mcstories.com/CowsBargain/CowsBargain.html (which is an all time fan favorite of mine), the main focus remains on the girl but we get a good chunk of the guy's point of view as well; also this is more of a pet peeve of mine than a game breaker - the next thing on this list however...

- Erica comes out of nowhere, has a rather sloppy last ditch introduction (that could have been put somewhere in the beginning as a potential foreshadowing to much greater effect) with a payoff that is as short as her inception; don't get me wrong I like the idea of a second cowgirl but the execution is lacking; what you could have done instead is incorporate my last point with this one, showing how Ryan runs into Erica when he isn't at home and gradually becomes her friend, makes a move on her (potentially due to his increased libido), maybe be guild ridden about it since he already has Sadie, but then grows accoustomed to being more of a womanizer and finally he actively diggs for a way by which he can manipulate Erica into becoming part of his lifestock - now THAT would have on one hand explained why a distance was growing between him and his first girl to begin with and on the other hand would have been freaking amazing and if done right, would easily net you a 6 out of 5 stars.

I want to stress again that I very much enjoyed reading your work and actually wanted to give it the full rating - if it wouldn't have been for the wasted potential in some places...

Now I know that this story of yours is already a good 2 years old and I'm sure that you have improved your writing skills during that time. But I thought that some feedback might help you and other authors grow even further.

Best of luck to your writing career, dear sir!

It's too bad most women out there aren't really into this. Any that are usually want to get knocked up, which most people do not want.

I'm also male as well and I liked the author's stories.If you can,please make more.

The recent comment on 04/3/16 was me but I ment to post this on the other story this person wrote. But still it's hard to find women who like this kinda thing.

I want to hear Erica's transformation

I want this to continue. I can see Ryan treating Erica as a person all the while she grows until Ryan deems that she must stay. At that points Sadie gets a friend. As Erica continues to grow, Ryan could take a local high school girl and initiate the process once again

This is a really well written story and all props to you for your gift but the as an earlier comment touched on you never explained Ryan's shift from an average boyfriend who might have a kink for breast milk to a manipulative and apathetic domineer. While I have theorized that it was all a ruse on his part to basically enslave Sadie it just seems like he kept making power moves to have Sadie assert his dominance on herself. But the Erica bit was messed up in my opinion. He technically drugged her and put her in a position to force her to accept him as her master which is illegal. Seeing him coerce her into becoming like Sadie would've been much better in my opinion.

Have You considered "How Ryan became a cowboy." as an alternate title?

Lovely story.

I could relate to Sadie. I felt much the same when I breastfed our twins ... a little bit like a cow!

Honestly, it would work better without the degradation aspect of losing humanity.

Large but still human breasts make more sense.

Even needing to be milked frequently, invent a clever wearable pump so she could still live a normal life with shopping.

A weighted backpack would restore her sense of balance.

Then recruiting more females for the herd.

Most women wouldn’t want to give up EVERYTHING.

This story is one of the best on the human cow genre. Sadie sets out to become a cash cow by producing breast milk for profit and becomes Ryan's cash cow in a very literal sense. It's a well told story of the irony in unexpected consequences..

"How Sadie Became A Cowgirl:" First of all, I had not meant to leave a comment.....until I read all the comments, which previous to mine, is thirty-four (34). The reason I mentioned the number of comments, is because a good ten (10%) percent totally desecrated your story with their endless "telling their own rewriting' of YOUR story! One reader's very lengthy comment talked several times about 'misspellings' (and many other "faults") when in fact his/her litany had a MINIMUM of six (6) misspelled words...what a hypocrite. Anyway, I wish to inform you that your did a very fashionable and thought provoking, unique themed story. As you've probably heard before, ignore the naysayers and slayers of a very well written genre fantasy that alters the anatomy of the human female.

Solid Hucow story. The slow, consensual descent was done quite well.

I agree with bigdaddy123. Nice story.

Really nice story. Slow and steady build up. Thought that he may give her a bitch suit when he told her to just walk on all fours. Would have been a nice fit.

Thanks for sharing this story. Keep it up.

this story is unbelievable....I cant imagine any woman being that large or having that much milk. Ive ben pregnant and breast fed my kids but not like her. In some ways, I could see Ryan inviting another and "milking" them both.

Had found this a while back and makes it for a to do list then blonde moment lol. Definitely one of the better Cow stories would love to read more especially of the next transformation and Ryan building a larger herd

hot to read and glad she got a friend now. think it went too fast though, wd have loved to read a slow adaption, Erica helping with the daily care, gets in touch, watching for many days and the reader gets to follow her building desire to become a cowgirl herself.

I agree with encore769 how the the details as speed of tit growth, amount of milk are totaly unplausible but as this is a fetish fantasy, well, the author can choose to go that way. For me personally enormous size is not necessarily enormously sexy. the acceptance of the animalistic side of her being, dropping all the dos and donts of nrmal womanhood since her body simply wont fit into it any more is the sexy part.

The crossing of borders. There was a German singer, Jürgen Drews, he and his wife in a tv talk show and the topic of the talk came to lactation. His wife took her breast out then, with running cameras, and squirted streams of white milk out to prove she was milky and stayed like this for years.

Back to this story, it may not be perfectly what I would like to read but sexy and hot and inspiring some nice moments when I read it so thanks to the author, keep it up!

I would love to see sequels. I assumed Ryan buying up the building was to provide living quarters for more cowgirls / hucows. More friends of theirs, maybe a sister of one of them, at least one MILF.