All Comments on 'How to Eat an Elephant Ch. 13'

Yet another fantastic addition in this series. Looking forward for another mom-son to have the sexperience of a lifetime. My well wishes to the writer.

Really enjoying this series. Look forward to each new chapter. Thanks

As much as my mother and I did with each other it was the one thing she would not totally admitted to. "not as big as dad but bigger than most."

How many times are you going to tell the same story?

On to a new chapter member of will you continue to retell the current member stories?

Yes

Can’t wait to see if you progress to the husbands and mothers in law. This a great story so far.

i agree with the commenter who said "same story different day". you're a great writer and its a clever story, but its starting to get monotonous. you need to find a way to either end it with a happy ending or move on to something else. letting the boys swap moms will cost you some readers and possibly scores. you could end it with the mom's club meeting and then maybe start a new story focusing on 2-3 moms with different angles for each. anyway - time to move on......

Good but it is now just more of the same. Waiting to see if it changes up.

Have the moms know a single dad that wants to hook up with his daughter, or vice versa.

Don’t lock yourself into just one storyline. You have real talent. Try going outside your comfort zone and see what you can do.

Wow..Nice one week lan of vacation by Ryan. And top of it Anne joins yoga workshop away from home to distract her husband and spend quality time with her son in hotel room.

Rated 5 star.

This series of stories would have been better if each chapter or pairing was a stand alone story. Part of what makes it work is the "believablity" of the story line. Yet we are to believe that out of what 6 families not one resisted not one mom or one son. No reference was made to any mom/son not directly in the story turning them down. Really? Then we have the virtually none existent husband/dad. No wife had any compunction about cheating on him. Oh yes they had to keep it a secret but not to spare him rather to protect them. There was one paragraph where one mom suggests that she loves her husband as she is fucking her son. The last son had fucked other married women liked the glint of their weddings as he fucked them. A predator. The mothers were slime and the sons were assholes. If this was in the LW category you would have been torn apart. As it is you had a very light response.

Well, how do I say this? I am jealous of your followers, and even though some of the comments make you feel like you are stuck in a rut, they kept on reading your story... That is something to be proud of!! Chin up, next story will have them, well they already did, uh, make a mess? :-P I read all 13, and now am going to see some of the other ones.

Thank you for your great story.

I really enjoyed the tale(s). Quite well written. A few missing letters or wrong words, but they were minor in the overall context. You did have a factual error in Chapter 1, which was pointed out in the comments for that chapter - the Dad coming up from downstairs to report the halftime score of the Mets game. Baseball does not have halftimes. One request. I held off reading the chapters in case there might be additions. Some authors will start a multi-chapter story and then not complete it, including some of the best authors this site has had. I have learned to wait until all chapters are in before starting multi-chapter tales to avoid that frustration. When you are done with a story, please indicate so, such as with "The End". Of course, maybe you have additional chapters in mind for this one. But I took the chance that your are done.

You are a good writer and this is a good series of stories. It kept my attention even though it became somewhat repetitive. I think three moms would be enough to get the point across. For most of us it brings up the question -- What if . . . Maybe a few actually know. Timing is everything. The more numerous, but no less significant, father-daughter stories bring up parallel questions.

So far, my answer is: mostly not good, but can be great!

Fantastic writing, read it in 1st week of corona lockdown, thinking of trying it on my mom as only both are in house, would like to read more about sarah n her 3 sons as she promised in one of the chapters and also the moms helping their mother in laws with their sons..

Loved all the chapters in this series, especially the way the love between mother and son is portrayed-just an extension of the natural love between them. I also loved that there was no swapping, intensifying the beautiful bond between each mother and son. Keep up the good work

Very good series.

You gave me an idea so tantalizing, I must start a new series based on a comment by one of the moms. Will let you know. Might take a while.

Greatest story series on here! Please continue.

Great series!! Part 1 started hot, the middle parts were simmering, and the last two, with Anne and Ryan, were boiling hot!!!

I feel a bit sorry for all dads that are cheated on. They dont deserve that.