All Comments on 'How To Get Ahead'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another great one

You are a very talented writer. This is another fine story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
super story

I don't know which excited me more - the way Julie humiliated Mr. Smith or the way Michelle suddenly stuck it to her !!

Great work, keep it up cap !!

busty_jessica_2busty_jessica_2almost 17 years ago
a bit slow...

I did like the story/context of it; although I would have prefared a lot more kinky games and scenarios to be included.

You captured he atmosphere and the people good , but again, I kind of missed out on your naughty sexual side...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well worth a read

I love this story, I love the ending. The tables have been turned as they say!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome!

This was a great story. Also, seems like it is set up for a sequel, revisiting Julie 3 months into her time as the office junior and seeing what Michelle has done to her. I love all of your stories. Keep up the good work!

BeauReadyBeauReadyover 3 years ago

Sex is not ethereal or infantile, and so does not lend itself to imaginary fantasy - unless you are immature or intellectually incapacitated.

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