by RobertLStevenson
I enjoyed the concept, though am glad that there is little liklihood of this becoming reality! You developed each step of the story well, drawing the reader on through her progress to the festival. It was sexy. Good job!
great series, maybe robert has sex with jennifer or the twins at some point perhaps. i think that would be really hot IMO
great work bro
keep it up
If in this society they view female bodies as soley for pleasure once they are 18 and have completed their festivals, why then does Robert see an issue with going farther with Jennifer?
I am looking forward to a time, (in the story), where fathers having regular sex with their daughters becomes common place. Father, after all, do have a responsibility to train their daughter properly.
Maybe Jennifer's mother could play a role as well, demonstrating techniques that she has learned to pleasure Robert and then allowing Jennifer to practice by following the example.