All Comments on 'Human Android Ch. 13'

Nice, and well-written, too.

I was curious to see how you dealt with the isolation suits and psuedo-subliminal commands. Their impact on the already traumatized minds was well handled.

I'll certainly look forward to what comes next.

Excellent story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I hope there are more to come.

Yours truly, Anonymous

Is the 'black bag' description, as requested, to your liking? Was it worth waiting for? Any suggestions to improve the scene, for next time?

Of course Rebecca will need her nipples pierced as requested!