All Comments on 'Humbled -- Final Edition'

Just wanted to say that I absolutely loved Humbled! What started as a very kinky incest fantasy quickly escalated into femdom paradise with the Pillory Stockade (I loved the Glory Yokes). I really did not expect the turn into political satire, but I loved the new world order you created. Definitely looking forward to reading some more of your work.

Hugs,

Heathyr

very good would have liked a page on the punishment of Mistress Michelle and the lawyer

The story really started very well and then the crash into "nonsense" followed! A pity!

Mattenw, sorry I can't develop a story line as well as you. Oh, wait. Maybe I can.

Dear "reddbunnz" I don't have to be Bach or Bethoven to recognize good classical music. I don't have to be a Renoir to recognize a good painting either. And I don't have to be a writer to recognize a good book or a good story. My mind is good enough for that. And your drifting into SiFi with your "law" and "women's rule" is nothing but nonsense. Well, a well started story has slipped into nonsense!