by Daniellekitten
This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep it em' coming.
WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY THIS STORY LIKE ALL YOUR OTHERS JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
I love your Heroine, I just wanted one of those goons to actually touch her. I know... Blood Thirsty Much, right!?! LOL! Seriously, thanks. Great read!
I really wanted one of the guys to touch her, I thought the big guy would and then there'd be some huge grudge because we'd find out they were all related and whatnot but I can see them holding a grudge even though no one died...bad guys are the dumbest. I'm liking that she returned to her hard side, there's no way a person would turn around that quick with just one touch.
He did not finish his story. I hope there will be more to come about him.
There were a few typo's but great other wise.