All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 11'

That you could post 5 chapters a day...lol, these stories are amazing :)

I figured Nicky had to do with the shell, and now I'm curious to see how. :) Hunter needs some sex ed lessons, though -- a woman doesn't get pregnant THAT fast. ;)

can't wait for the next chapter. I am having so much fun with this story. Hope you are having fun with it as well.

So glad for Mirage & Hunter. PJ xx

Love it, love it, love it. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

The jump to Nicholas was wholly unexpected and I completely checked to see if i was on the right story... I wonder if the transition could be a bit less forced?

I am enjoying the story quite alot and am looking forward to what happens next

I was a bit confused when we first met Nicky but now that I know what's going on (kinda) I like him and Arielle a lot! Can't wait to see what's up with them. What did they do to Nicky? Was Arielle targeted or they randomly grabbed her? Can't wait to get some answers!

I love how you didn't just throw two couples at us in the beginning, I think two couples per story works. And the switching between them builds up the anticipation, but I love the innocent of the new girl and I'm almost sure Nick was in an earlier story. I like when the girls are trusting and sweet, it makes the guys gentler and the love scenes so much better when it gets out of control. Next chapter!

I think i love him!! Haha, don't even know why because he's still a new character but he's so gentlemanly for such a stud!

Hmmm, Nicholas and Arielle sound interesting!

Normally I don't comment but this story grips me in a way that few other authors have been able to. Please don't ever stop writing. I love this storyline.

Splendid bit of lit. Thank you and keep up the excellent work

still confused but loving the story.....keep it going and finish the explaining.