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- Hunter Hunted Ch. 13
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by Daniellekitten
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Anonymousover 14 years agosuccubus is the female version of a pleasure demon, since domino is a male, he should be an incubus which is the male counterpart of the succubus. just a friendly heads up.
PennLadyover 14 years agoI like how everything is both falling apart and coming together sort of at the same time. :)
Anonymousover 14 years agoI read and reread your stories even if they are old...I love your writing and this is one of the best.
mechmanasover 14 years agostill think the other version would have been better but i think i see where u are going and it look good so far. love the ASP series. thank for sharing
cantfightfateover 14 years agoHe's very intriguing. Now Hunter just needs to save Mirage, declare his love for her, convince her to be with him forever, etc. :) Looking forward to it!
magicsspottedstablesover 14 years agoonce again you leave me dying to read the next chapter
GlosUKover 14 years agoAnother 'good guy' & we need more on what happened when Mirage asked for directions from her point of view. PJ xx
Anonymousover 14 years agoI love it, can't wait for more chapters to read. Keep up the great work.
SilentReadsover 14 years agoIt's great to see you having so much fun writing this. It really shows in the story. Keep it up!
LovelyDarkLullabyover 14 years agoDomino sounds yummy, brooding sexiness, can't wait for you to get more chapters up. I'm getting antsy now that I know I'll have to wait.
Anonymousover 14 years agoIs Nick any relation to Tynan Stavaros from... I can't remember what you called the story, but it's the one where you changed the name.
I can't find it, so when is/was it published?
Anyway, as always - awesome!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoVampire and succubus? An unusual and sexy combo. He's gonna be fun!
canndalmost 14 years agoVery cool. Domino from your other story. But when he meets Lyca isn't it like centuries after Selena died? How long before that does this story take place? Well, good chapter. And that's awesome that Hunter loves mira. hope he finds her soon.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI love your stories!!! For the record, Domino would have to be an Incubus. Incubi are male and Succubi are female when they materialize
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIm really enjoying this story....but a succubus is a female and a inccubus is a male.
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