by m_storyman_x
Great story i love outdoor stories. It almost got to wordy in the beginning but turned out great.
Great story!! I love outdoors women and this is the pefect image. I sure do hope this story line continues, more hunting, fishing, hiking and great fucking with a hot outdoors babe !! GREAT start!
for a well written story that I enjoyed very much. Was a little worried about that guy for a while but he finally woke up. I agree, lets have a followup.
Very good start and great layout of all the details, but you just barely got them started fucking and then quit. More of this story, next hunting or fishing, her getting another girl interested in going with them, him starting hunting/fishing classes for women.
You have a great style and the outdoors settings are spectacular! You have kept me reading for a week.thank you
Well written and very technically correct. But. I cannot help but see the similarity between this story and “the husband comes home to find his wife going out on a date” except from the other point of view.