by I_Dusk
WOW, all this time I thought that Richard was the only one that was really damaged in this story. Nate's pain may quite possibly be even more traumatic due to his loss. I think this is probably the most powerful chapter so far, at least emotionally, it most certainly was for me. WOW!!!
Nate is carrying around such a burden. And Jerry’s risky lifestyle really needs some adjustment. This was an intense chapter.
I am so grateful for you guys :) thank you. I feel, however, like I should warn you that we are heading for a rough path before we will get to enjoy the climax.
You had given us hints about something occurring in Nate’s past. Nice to see the past including Matt and his fighting history. Looking forward to understanding more about what makes these guys tick. Great but emotional chapter!