All Comments on 'Hybrid Theory Ch. 02'

I just got doner reading bhoth storiesof hybird and loved them both so much. Plese do more opon this seires for i can't waite till i read the next one.

I was really getting into the story until you bought the lesbian sex out. I thought that the first chapter was the best and i wish it could have gone on in the same form.

great read both hybrid stories loved them both

I really liked this one; I do have to admit I would have loved it without the lesbiand sex. To see Molly defeat Olivia before it ever happened would have given more passion, but I'm glad there was a happy ending! :)

I soo loved it!! I liked everything but the girl on girl sex. I love werewolves. What happens next to Leland and Molly?

OMG u have to finish this Story you are a Really good Writer Please Finish this one :)

This is a Hot, Sensual story. Please continue Molly's & Leland's tale with the new cub. Thanks for your great writing and attention to detail.

I love werewolf storie's, this one was very good and i would love it if you contiued the story of hybrid theory. Keep up the good work.

I hope you continue with it.

This is a nice story but when did Molly get tied up? I seemed to have missed that part of the story. This looks like the beginning of a very good series. There is a lot of questions that need to be answered though. Wolfmann

i absolutely loved both stories!!!!

I loved both chapters, but i feel they ended to soon. You left me hanging. I hope you continue with more

Please continue!!

I like the story line and I hope there is more coming!

I'm enjoying the story so far. The girl on girl action was a nice twist. What's next?

What's next? i cant wait until the next installment. great job

please add another chapter. you have a really good story going here. thank you. if you were to put in book form i would buy it.

I MUST SAY I LOVE THE STORY, HOPE TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTERS SOON.

Can't wait for you to continue this.

wow i loved it. the love story is beautiful and molly is takin whats hers. please keep writing this story. i want to know what happens next.

It would have been nice to get a more harmonious end to this story. It is quite unbelievable that inexperienced Molly gets the better over Oliva though!

It was not quite as smooth as the first, but good nonetheless. Keep going!

Really! This plotline contradicts itself over and over. Molly comes off as a slut, but is a virgin? Do werewolves mate for life, or not? Do they have telepathic conectuons to their mates, or not? Are their mates pre-destined for them, or not? Make up your mind and be consistent. Don't make up drama just for drama's sake. And werewolves are a matriarchial society???? WHAT?? This made my head hurt! Ugh!

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Maybe some background on what is werewolf lore,history,mythology,traditions.So many twists and turns in the story.You need to set story guidelines,themes,and roles,before you start writing,,seems like it was written on the go,just to get it done,,,needs lots more work.

It was interesting to read. Rather hard to understand the switch of all the characters also they need more details and to be better "flushed" out so that they become more. If you know what I mean. But like always keep writing and come into your own!

I THINK THE STORY NEEDS MORE FINE TUNING. DO A LITTLE MORE TO DEVELOP EACH CHARACTER AND MORE CREDIBLITY TO THE MYTHS AND LEGENDS. ITS A POTENTIALLY HOT STUFF U GOT HERE... GOOD BEGINNING I SAY..., CUM ON AND MAKE THIS TOTALLY ROCKING!!!

I thought it was very good!! Maybe in the next chapter if you do another one that you should have Leland explain the history of his heritage to Molly so readers can understand your characters better. I really enjoyed this chapter very much and I hope you write another SOON!

Keep going! I need to know more. Does she have a pup? What do they have Olivia do?

i was enjoying your story. but like to many authors on this site you chose to drop out on us.

Great start. Excellent spelling n grammatic. It's refreshing. Keep going!