All Comments on 'Hypersexual Mom Ch. 01'

U should use medicine transformation to turn moms body bustier and make her a nympho. Like taking depression meds ina trial n they have unknown side effects for mom and son :)

Is english your first language - if it is, you write like a grade schooler.

This was a page full of nothing. And on top of that, the bad translation makes for a very difficult read. I wouldn't recommend you write a part two.

Nice

Actually grateful this was never continued. It's like an essay on how NOT to write an erotic story.