All Comments on 'Hypno-Submission Pt. 01'

Very good start. Cannot wait for what I hope is a big reveal.

Looking forward to the next one

Amazing story, can’t wait to see where it goes. Your story “I Think” is my absolute favorite on this site, so I’ll be eagerly awaiting updates to this new story!

Do continue.

brilliant writing

For those of you who enjoyed "I Think" the full length novel "I Think You're Right" is available on Amazon. See my profile page for details.

Not my usual go to, but something about it just got to me. Triggered me? lol Really hope you continue this as a series. It has so much potential. :)

Not normally my thing, but something about it really drew me in. I hope you continue with this series - it has so much potential. :)

Very good story, I look forward to hearing more about this story.

Loved it, really looking forward to the next chapter!

This is especially sexy in context!

Such a good story! Im desperately awaiting part 2

I guess I do like it a bit M B...crnhotwife!

Wonder full idea with equally fantastic follow thru and writing. I'm very intrigued and thoroughly entertained. While I'm not sure this adaptation of mind control holds any scientific merit, I do enjoy the level of control, and the repetitive messages, i know, are very on par with keeping the subject in a fog. Overall, really well done.

Amazing I wish there was a link to the video ;) I'm a good girl

Well it's a Great Story, while i was reading it I was wondering "How to make this happen for real, is it Possible, do you ever respond to your Readers ?? So does the "Video" really exist ?? How can i watch it or is it only a Video for women to watch ??

Can it be adapted ??? Would love to correspond so I am hoping you do respond with your "Readers".

Hope to hear from you soon!

Great Story like how it goes on so far. I wonder if it would work the hypnosis on me. Thanks for sharing.

I read chapter 01, following it back from the current one to start at the beginning. It was a well done idea, and the girls in it click well and have personality.

The only critique would be tighten it up a bit. Katie is the main character and progressed which is great. There's a lot of 'good girl' sequence. Repeating is a key to the hypnosis, but maybe some could be compressed and move a bit faster. I'm not a good editor, but that would be the only minor thing I see in a great story!

this is so fun to read. i love it and gave it five stars. thanks for sharing.

The characters are nice and also the trigger and all the hyonosis stuff :)

Great start kind of hoping it sould just be katie becoming the slave but seems there might be ithers involved aswell

i can't wait for this to be me :D riding around Toronto in Your passenger seat, completely empty and being filled up with Your commands.

i can't wait to show up to a place with no memory of how we got there and no idea what sort of mischief of Yours im going to stumble upon as we go about our outing.

Absolutely amazing story and this was just first chapter of 12 something long series?

I was really shocked and delighted by this pleasant surprise afterall i thought it was only till here and it kind of left a bitter taste in mouth at such a sudden ending.

Thanks a lot for amazing fantasy

I’m a good girl. I’m a good girl. I will continue to read the series!

woah this is so good!!!!!!!

The moment Katie realised she was tranced it was already over for her, now she would be nothing but Master's slave and I'd love to see how she starts spiralling down.