All Comments on 'I-40'

TOOO FREAKING GOOD!!!!!!!

Need someone to proof read it lots mistakes but still worth the read

you should so continue it where the aunt joins in and they have a kid or the whole female family joins in then in the next install ment the male side finds out and schemes away to join too

Very well written! Intensely erotic! A great read! Write the next chapter. Enough said. AnHoa Rifleman

little sloe developing been nice to have gotten them together sooner. a sequel w aunt would be a great finish

Can't wait for the sequal and, since this is the first of your stories that I've read, I'll read some more until it shows up.

I really enjoyed this story. The build up and tension was very erotic. I liked that it was not the usual BANG! as soon as they were alone. Can't wait to meet the sister and see where this goes.

As well-written a Mom-Son tales as I have ever read on this site. Just outstanding - a home run! There's a lot of work on this site that gets 5 stars because of a couple of hot sex scenes, but this gets me on all levels. It has good narrative drive, great build up and tension, evocative writing and excellent mood. Definitely a favorite now.

So sweet and loving and with a good slow build-up so the characers could bloom off of the screen and into real life, or it seemed that way to this reader.

When the sex finally took place it was very erotic and explicit, but very loving.

I would love to read about when they get to her sisters home and how the sex can explode into a threesome with his mom and his aunt.

Now that Joe has had sex with his mother he should stop being such a wimp and dominate her. He should take charge of her and show her that he is the only man that she will ever need.

It seems as if that is what she wants.

I hope that Kate has found herself a husband in her son Joe.

Thanks for the super read.

just..... "wow".

Busking Robert Johnson songs & fixing the car - it adds up . Ditto all + things previous comments said before this one.

I just loved all the time you took going into details. I hope to see a follow up to this tip and meeting of the aunt.

Never came so hard reading a story.

Please add more chapters. I would like to read about the aunt, other people in groupies, shaving, hair cutting, tattooing their names on each other, fucking the tattoo artist while the son watches, Getting her pussy shaved in a barber shop etc

Keep going. I look forward to read all your stories.

Is there more to come?

The aunt sounds like a firecracker too. Will there be another.

Yes, there *will* be a second episode, already plotted and started work on. I think you all kind of already know where it's going.

it turned OUTmom was worth the wait how about the aunt she sounds good will we find out soon

Great story... It was hot, hot, hot! More please

would like to see what happens with aunt sarah

Let's see a second chapter please!!! Keep up the good work.

Extremely erotic - love the way you have described the journey across the US

Looking forward to PartII

Venus

Great road mom/son story. Very well written build up and hot scenes. Nice work, thanks!

I loved the slow build up of your story allowing us to get to know Joe and Kate. The lake scene was excellent and then the motel was a great finish for this chapter.

I hope you let us know what happens when they get to Sarah's house. You didn't reveal if Sarah has any sons or daughters but I'm sure if there is another chapter we will all find out.

RecHiker

More please! No way can you leave your readers wanting more and not give it to us! Such wonderful writing. I do hope the wait won'r be long as I'm hoked on the story line already.

...smiling from ear to ear...but pleasantly weak! Damn, you write good. Good characters, good story, good build up, and totally hot sex. I can hardly wait till they are in San Diego. Please don't disappoint us...there just has to be a three-some in our future.

Thanks for your gift to us!

Wow! What terrific writing. You painted the pictures in my mind so brilliantly, and so thrillingly.

This is the first time I've seen your writing so I'm off now to explore some more.

really good story amazing build up and tease more please

I HHHHAAATTTTE ANAL!!!!!!

STTTOOPPP IT!!!

-ryan

Not only have you authored a very sexy tale, but the quality of your writing was really good! I'll admit, some of the backstory seemed a bit much (just for impatient me, perhaps), but this was a great story. I hope you have another installment soon.

PS...I'm not sure, but those might be katydids, instead of cicadas, in the dusk.

-Rutagar

This is the best writing I have found on this site in all the years I've been reading here. Superb. Keep up the good work.

That was soooooo lame when he pulled out of her cunt and wasted his potent load. All the charge and and buildup of a week's cross-country travel with his mom, not being able to jack off, knowing he should save the cream in steadily heavy balls and the sons fails in the end, not being man enough to ram his cock home and flood his horny mother's cunt! Even we could all see the mom changed her mind and knew she wanted her boy's baby-making cream deep in her womb where it belonged, ready to stew with her ripe mommy-eggs and create new life the just the two of them would naughtily know....

...then he wastes further spunk in anal. SMH...

Loved the build-up of tension and the conflict. Stories where people just jump right into their mother's count aren't as fun, this way makes it plausible.

Clearly, the aspect of breeding was a part of it as well. Though he pulled out, pre-cum has sperm in it too.

You are on my top five authors list. Your stories are well-written and well-paced, and your characters have realistic thoughts and reactions (given the fantasy situations). Keep up the great work, look forward to more.

this is one of the best stories I have read in awhile, you should make a part 2 of this!! :)

You are all class... love your stories and am glad you are writing again........please some moreF3D5

pacing of the story was great. would be fun to see where this leads. obviously the aunt needs to get into the action too.

love your story...live on I-40 in oklahoma, towns u mention are close, loved that! hope u write part 2 and include the aunt!!!

prob the best story ive read on lierotica More More More

Probably thebest writing I've come across on here. And sexy as hell.

What a great story! Does it get better when they get to San Diego? How does it go with Mom AND his Aunt? Love it

The best story I've read on any site, and I've read a lot. Very professional, Bravo.

The best story I've ever read on any site, and I've read a lot. Very professional, Bravo. Sorry I had to put my user Name to this.

Fuck was that hot!

At last, another writer that actually knows how to write erotica!

Wonderful stuff! Keep it up, so to speak!!!

I'm no literary critic, but I know when I've read a well-written story, and that was a great story on many levels. Like another commenter, this was my introduction to your writing, and I'm off to see what else you've got. Got yourself another fan!

this one is very hot and horny incest story i ever read i lkie it so much

Your writing is awesome, I can only hope that you might consider continuing the trip? & maybe including the Sister/Aunt?

Really good story and writing. Will be reading more of your stories. Hope you have as others have suggested continued the story somehow when they get to the sisters house.

On the road again, deep inside and loved every word. Well written and timed, there are too many wham-bams out there, this was paced nicely and I can't wait until they hit Aunt Sarah and San Diego. So many ways this could turn. Thank you.

please continue the story and with the aunt!

Made me recall a trip I had with my sister years ago and I came without even touching my Dick. Thank you keep writting. Frenchy

I will be waiting for the next series.What made this so real is I am from wilmington,and know Devon park real well.

Interesting characters. I've enjoyed my time spent reading your work. Additional chapters would be nice but this stands alone quite well.

Great story, thanks!

Really great story. One of the best i have ever read.. Please continue and let us know what happens when they arrive at his aunt's place....

nicely written story needs more chapters like when they get to aunts house and what happens next

Ok, people- what the fuck is with the mindless circle jerk in the comments here??? This was a FAIR submission at best. The pacing?- Sure, it was good. The humor?- Yep,loved the sarcasm. And the greatest feature is its lighthearted tone, and willingness for the characters to get really raunchy, but so far THAT'S IT. All this leg-humping bullshit like "GREATEST STORY, SO WELL WRITTEN" ... Some of you are fucking illiterate, then. More grammar and structural mistakes than holes in swiss cheese. And the shit you morons DO object to is laughable! That idiot who thought the anal just completely RUINED everything, love that guy. But the imbalanced way it shifted to the guy thinking about sucking his own dick and ENJOYING drinking his own cum, even before the author added any SHRED of hetero action, that doesn't bug ya at all, genius? The editing here kinda sucked too, compared to the author's other stuff, much of which I really dig. And then there's just lazy shit, like misspelling Delorean, or that quip about Dean Martin, who's KNOWN for being the Rat Packer WHO DIDN'T DRINK. Anyway, even though you commenters are the intellectual hybrid crossbreeds of sheep, lemmings, and pond algae, I'll still definitely read the next chapter. I just hope its a little better than the 3 outta 5 this one is.

Well, I thought it was a good story regardless of what the anon douche bag previously said. There were that many spelling errors and the sex was very hot. I love how brave these assholes can be tearing down a story anonymously.

I really don't want to get into the whole debate about the story, but what difference would it have made if the comment had been from a registered user as opposed to an anonymous reader? What would you have done? Sent angry messages to him? Ooh, scary!

Other than the useless trip through L.A., I thought it was a fine tale!

You had this beautiful story of a mom going cross country with her son. Then you lost me at the point she started talking about how she likes being fucked and asking her son those questions. It just didnt go with her reluctance in doing things. Yes she horny and she mastubated next to her son but she thougt he was asleep. Yes she grts nakes and sleepa like that hugging her son but you clearly explain that. Ahe tries to touch him sexually but she stops. Then all of a sudden she is blatantly talking about cock, tits, fuck, ass, cum and all the other. I felt like I skipped something in the decelopment of this character. You completely jumped the shark there. When I finally got to the master scene (the sex scene) I was disappointed. You made it suspenseful and so real in the beginning. I liked how these characters interacted but once I got to page 4 its like I was reading new characters.

It is very disappointing and frustrating when there is so much potential in the beginning and then at the end your story is a complete let down. The sex scene between them wasn't even enjoyable.

Honestly I would suggest you shorten this story as it would pack a better punch. Something it really needs in my opinion. I don't see how you are rated really high. You have so many grammatical errors and I had to reread a few paragraphs because your character direction didn't make sense. I feel like you gave up toward the last half of your story.

Mom takes off her bra and cuddles up to her son's back in that car as they go to sleep. Okay. Then why does she spend the next few chapters covering her boobs and being shy? Why is he so afraid to look at her boobs? I found that part almost annoying.

well, afterall its a mom son hot anal love story. like it, but theres a number of points r missing. in a mom son story, mom shouldnt be that free and open with son at first. its son who suppose to proceed to his mothers nudity, and slowly the mother would surrender to her son. thats how a mom son story concept should been proceed.

Not your best, but still a fine read. Biggest issue for me was the use of Brit terms like "breaker's yard" and "busking". Here they're called wrecking yards and street musicians. There were a couple of others, and they threw me for a bit of a loop when i read them.

I was spoiled by your story The Cabin. That, my friend, was a masterpiece.

as they worked their way across the country. not sure I liked the revelations of mom's past sexual activities, but it worked for them.

Unless something has been deleted, I do not understand OldWayne's reference to the wasted trip across L.A.

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develop with sister as well great build up

I loved it. Thank you so much. Great writing.

It was like I was right there. Great buildup, I wish there were a few more encounters once they got together, I sure had a great orgasm at the end. If you have not gotten the next chapter out yet, I hope it includes getting mom knocked up a few times and a threesome with Aunty. Again, Kudos, screw the spelling Nazis, I don't come here for spelling corrections, I come here for a great fantasy and a great orgasm or five. :-)

I really loved builed up to sex you need add another chapter or 2 5*****

BUT I don't get it??? BLOW JOBS ARE NOT the greatest feeling ever! There is absolutely NOTHING that can compare to cumming in a pussy. Pulling out and cumming on tits or ANYTHING else is a let down. NATURE wants the cum where it belongs in the pussy. THAT feels the absolute BEST!!! NOTHING COMPARES!

the next chapter could you enclued the aunt this to good a story to end there want more of this story

please keep going with this story. Sooo much more fun to be had yet.

Oh so friggin Hot! This story needs another chapter which includes the sister/aunt! What a sexy set of sisters.

Best thing I've ever read on here,please keep going with this, need to find out what happens when they meet the sister.just don't go to over the top like some others have.....

Nice work!

This is the first one I have read, but will look at others too.

I hoped the story would continue to San Diego and the Aunt and Mom being one happy family...

You said previously that a sequel was planned and in order... well?

Consider this a figurative kick in the ass... 😉

6 years since you wrote this, I guess another chapter is never coming. Really to bad cause this is one of the hottest mom & son stories on Lit. Would be awesome to add the beautiful Aunt. Five Stars again.

A sequel plz...

Awesome story. Congratulations. You're very good.

Nice plot, good characters, story was pretty good, too. Wish there was more. you have a good set up for a few more chapters would love to see where you would take this.

I didn't like the anal. I'm not gay.

You're a really gifted writer. Thank you

I thought I'd commented on this long ago but better late than never. It's very hot with a delicious build-up and dynamite sex. A big 5 from me.

This is a great story. One of the few I've read more than once. I would love to read more. This deserves another chapter or two. Do they continue after arriving? What about the mom's sister? Does she join in? Does her sister have any kids who join in or whom she's already having sex with?

This was such a delight to read. I am pretty sure that others will agree that there should be a follow up sequel to this, but maybe all those unanswered questions should be just that....

thank you, a 5 from me!

I really enjoyed this story, i dare say it certainly provoked my mind and i couldn't stop reading and decided to read it a second time.

I wish there was a sequel because it would have been nice to see the Aunt involved too, however, it is not necessary because it left a lot of room for the reader to fantasize for themselves.

Thank you

Hot!

Really enjoyed this story... Wowww

Nice story... loved the way

Excellent everything!!!

The anal stuff, especially her doing a2m at the end pretty much ruined any 'romantic' aspect this could have otherwise had.

A bit long but still very good. Liked the flow and build up. Only wish he had fucked her and left a creampie in her pussy. Always like the pregnancy risk.

Very good although a bit long. Still everything flowed together as you built up to him fucking his mother.

Loved everything about this story. I didn’t want it to end.

For the most part the story was hot and love the pace of it. There was a part where there was a sentence or two that made absolutely no sense. Then there were parts during the sex that it got confusing. Had all the promise of a five star but for the previous mentioned I am giving it a 4.