by uncledickme
The devil you know is better when so-called called salvation is hectoring and banal. To me, this was a good to excellent story. The previous installments merit checking out. I the author.
This is one HOT story ... cousins having good sex and Jolene's attitude is something to build on. Please write another chapter, so that Dick can get her to live with him to get out of that awful relationship. Jolene should continue to let her hair down and let him eat her and finger her. She should let go as he bangs her hard and long. Some added information about both of them would be good, pls continue. Thank you.
So whats the differences between the story series youve been writing and this new entry? If its what ends up happening years later why did you release it before finishing the other series? If its the same people telling a completely unrelated story why not change their names? It was a good story just confusing compared to what youve already written about these characters.
I agree with one of the other commenters. This is confusing with the other series you have ongoing(or did you run into a block and can't figure out where to go)? I would have changed the characters name. And the Dick, thing. Let it go, dude!
This seems to take place long after your other story will have finished. But it seems like the earlier story never happened.
That's why I'm confused...........
These two are destined to be together. What a sexy couple they would make.