All Comments on 'I Dare You'

A story definitely worthy of a sequel, when will we get to partake

Started out kind of interesting, and I was relieved and grateful to think the 'pegging' was NOT what it normally means, especially from a Brit writer. Unfortunately, it went off the rails early with the guy wearing the girl's panties bullshit, and got progressively worse from there with the watersports, self-fellatio and other bullshit. If that wasn't bad enough, turning her into a total slut with some other guy, instead of her brother, and getting them all involved was just... well... predictably and sadly british beta-gay. Swing and a miss, despite a worthy premise to start it off.

Excellent, the best I've read here in a very long time. Needs a follow-up with the two girls playing together and then with Brandon, I'm sure you'd do a good job of writing that.

8 pages of going back and forth, teasing and other bullshit, and at the end half a page of sex between them. Nope.

I need at least 5 more stars for that. Excellent slow burn, very likeable characters. Loved it

One or two dares too many for my tastes, but still a fantastic story

Great story as always. Very good for #100!😉

This was really good. Enjoyed it a lot.

This story for me was a more show and tell. It lacked romance, love even friendship. She constantly made decisions that were against her own best interest. Saying you love someone else but was romantic with another is dishonest.

Fuck me that was AWESOME! Loved the characters and their development felt so real and true. Would love to see a continuation of this? Congrats on 100 stories :)

Well done. I enjoyed the story. 5*

What a fantastic story!!!!! Absolutely loved it. I hope that in the future there will be part II

Great story. It was like The Never-ending Tease!

Wow, amazing story and was thrilling the whole way through. Only one part where you called Brandon, Mike. It’s on page 8, third section, first paragraph. It’s just after Sarah and Mike have sex and Sarah thinks of pegging Brandon.

Very original and incredibly erotic. Wish I had a sister

Great story and well written.

Meh. Very anticlimactic story. All of that for a fuck?

Until page 6, it was alright and then you had the dare about sucking his own dick. You lost me there. I skipped the rest and I'm glad I did. They are both in relationships and they still had sex for the sake of a game. Sure they are hot for each other but they aren't single. If it was part of the romance between the two of them it would have been good but no, you didn't do that.

Absolute perfection. Well paced, and really hot.

Fantastic couldn't stop reading!!

That was amazingly hot story I read throughout the day!! I stayed hard the entire time I was reading!!

Amazing story that I read throughout the day! So hot! I was rock hard the entire time I was reading.

Nicely done

This one was a 5 until about 1/2 way thru when she fucked Mike. Went downhill from there with the butt stuff and over the top teasing. Very little passion or romance, much less love or affection. Could have been a lot better and I ended up disappointed. 3/5

This needs a sequel! Absolutely amazing story!

O you can't stop it there has b a continuation enjoyed the build up and gentle escalation

This was a fantastic story. Love the build up - foreplay if you will. Nikki, if you are half as sexy and adventuresome as your story, you must be my goddess. I wish I had met you. If you ever want someone to chat with give me shout! Duit4meplz@gmail.com

Wow.....just wow !

Very enjoyable and nicely written. The 'will they, won't they' kept me hooked. The only slight disappointment was that Mike got to screw Sarah before Brandon.

As I have never posted any comments. I have to say holy fraking A that was hot. Three times hotter thank anything I have read in years.

Nice slow buildup good story

Beautifully crafted and written, a delight from start to finish. I sincerely hope there is a follow up at some time

Congratulations on your 100th story!

Slowly building up to the climax, very sexy. Knew they would end up fucking but well told.

Was waiting for the pegging but !

Knew they would end up fucking but loved the way it builds up to the climax.

Thought the real pegging might be a dare , but you can't have everything.

Five, times ten

Wonderfully original concept and very well executed. Very erotic. Thanks so much for writing it.

Wow. This was amazing. Kudos to you! I was hooked from the first words. Thank you

I loved the story. Great idea, well written, loved the build up n how you made it progress without rushing anything. Glad you didnt just add a 3some with Becky even though I kept expecting it cause that's how most stories go on here. It was nice you had the characters date others n not jus trying to fall in love n be together also. 5 stars n gonna check out more of your stories on here. Can't wait to read more n congrats on 100 published stories on the site.

A bloke of eighty odd years: I haven't been that hard or for that long in years.

Absolutely fantastic! I, too, was expecting the pegging to be a dare, but the story was so hot, that particular dare being skipped was fine.

Great story, as always.

Thanks so much for posting.

That was hot as hell. Thank you.

You never disappoint!! What a great story ..I guess the romantic in me wanted him to profess his love for her at the end. Great story ! Thanks 🙏🏼

Fantastic. If I could give it 10 ⭐ I would do so. I loved how is slowly built in itself. The tension. Never knowing what exactly was coming or when, but you knew there was some6that hopefully escalated it. I seldim read stories this long but this one drew me in. Excellent 👍

I am an occasional reader of your stories but they are always readable and stories to enjoy, as I was reading I kept coming up with different scenarios for them to try, but you seem to have covered so many I can't think of anything else. I it waiting for something other than the ultimate to happen then have to wait for a chapter 2, so it's difficult t imagine where to go from here. As they are both firmly attached to their respective boy/girlfriends you seem to bolted the gate to those particular avenues but I feel sure there will be a follow-up, we'll just have to wait and see.

But nothing less than 5 🌟 for you my dear.

Congratulations on 100🍾🎉. Such a great read!

That was a thoroughly enjoyable story 🥰

Damn this story was hot needs a part 2 and involve Becky more

Thank you for this incredible story 😘

Some of the best “literature” that I read is here at Literotica thanks to writers such as you.

Great plot, great dialog and great pace.

Best story I ever read by far ! It was amazing. The idea, their relationship, everythig was perfect !

Thanks for this hot story

That was an awesome story. While long, it had a great build up to the final dare. It was well worth the read. Please write a part two.

The build up was excellent, going a little further each time until finally it was all consuming, my only critique would be the porno cock.

This story was fucking outstanding. I wish their encounter was longer though given the buildup. If they fucked Cowgirl, Reverse Cowgirl and Doggy I rather you "show" me what's happening instead of "telling" me what's happening. If that makes any sense at all

The build, the tease.... the possibility of Becky. You've certainly left your options open for a part II. I hope there will be another chapter.

wow what a great story - had me hard all the way through. please write part 2

I would love a part two to this. Or even a version (albeit shorter just hitting the high points) told from Brandon’s POV I mean what is he thinking this entire time. So much to expand on. A really well told story. I was actually surprised that the buildup wasn’t a turn off. You built it up and have a little release here and there which helped keep me invested without frustration. My only critique is the final encounter. When he whispered to her how he wanted her to fuck him with abandon, and no rules I swear I almost came. Lol. But then the sex didn’t match that tone. The best part of that sex “scene” was him whispering to her. Still a great job! Definitely would love more!!!!

Intriguing how the storyline progressed bit by bit, while Sarah seemed to become more deeply committed to getting laid by Brandon, and Brandon, in turn, seemed to become more disinterested, perhaps because each was getting more emotionally involved with other playmates? One alternative story is a rewrite of the entire scenario from Brandon's perspective, how he was feeling bout getting played vs. being a player? Maybe save that one for story 200?

I bet she looses the dare game. Pretty sure, when he dares her to stop taking her BC pill and a month down the road he dares her to have sex during her fertile window. She won't let it get that far. But that means she would loose that game. Checkmate, Brandon for the win.

Wow Nikki, just loved this story. It's a worthy 100th story. Please keep going!! I loved the long build up and it was worth it. Looking forward to reading another 100 stories from you!!

Please come back and make a part two to this, this story was amazing!! Wonderfully written, however it was missing something I’m sure most of us readers craved. A romantic aspect between the siblings. There’s so much more that can be expanded on between them. I love RG750’s idea where he could possibly dare her to get off of BC and fuck him during her fertile period. Would love to read a version where we can see what was going on through Brandon’s mind through all this. Especially that scenario where she masturbated on his dick while he laid still, super fucking hot! You’ve got a way with words in this story Nikki, please do continue with this and consider writing more soon! This is probably my third time reading it!

❤❤🔥🔥🔥

I love your devious mind. ;-)

I always find it amusing that some readers complain about stories with a long, slow buildup that allow us to become familiar with the characters as our anticipation builds right along with them. Those types of readers remind me of the type of sexual partner who wants to get right to the act itself, without any warmup or foreplay. I pity the objects of their affection.

The author’s pacing and character development is superb. FIVE STARS!

Thank you for the story. Beautiful.

Five Stars. Thanks.

Had to remove my undies toward the end of this!! Great job!

Let's just say I couldn't stop reading until the last written word appeared in front of my eyes and then having been rubbing my dick the entire length of your story, my dick exploded. Thank you very much!

wild good fun

Good story, very poor choice of words

I liked it, but.... you had a lot of grammatical errors, several paragraphs that ran too long, a few typos, and at one point, you had dialog between the two main characters but Mike got thrown into the mix by mistake. But it was a good story; keep on writing.

More please!!!

I love the story. I hope you're right a sequel. I'm a big fan of your writing so keep it up!

Amazing story, and so well written. The prolongation and escalation of the pegging game was the ultimate tease. I almost wish it didn't reach a climax, but was left hanging - just as the involvement of Becky and Mike were left in potentia.

A brilliant piece of creative and imaginative writing. I love these glimpses into your mind.

Very hot writing. I almost came several times . Great ending. Games and dares are really good sexual motivators. Thanks!

I loved it! Even more because the siblings were in it just for the fun. It is the best kind of incest, ever. Just lust and pleasure!

This was a good story. In reality I'd rather it 3.5* but I'm going to 5* it due to Literotica grading. This is better than most of the stories on the site.

I had to skip male but stuff and self blowjobs. If I wanted things in butts and guys giving bjs I'd troll the gay male tags not brother sister.

I prefer brother sister romance and both of them being "unfaithful" to each other bugged me.

I liked the curvy female interest/protagonist. Too many stories have women that are built like boys. My ideal is somewhere in the neighborhood of Christina Hendrix, not 90lbs flat chested and shaved pubes. It feels like a pedo story when that happens. (Which it is good this story doesn't have)

Bravo, again 👏👏👏

I absolutely adore Cunt in every way and love to eat one while fucking another. This story is fabulous, I love incest, it is the best. I fuck my sisters and my mother constantly. Five stars for this. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

Wonderfully done

I was fully mezmorized by this story and couldnt stop reading it to see what was coming next. This would make one hell of a movie. Playing by the rules made it more erotic as most of us would have caved in for the grand bufet immediately. Something about sister-brother desires are incredably hot. Well written, great plot and I am sure made most readers hard, wet and horny.

Yes the story was very hot. I dare you to keep the game going

Nobody does this better! The pacing, the ramping-up of sexual energy, the escalation from one orgasm to the next are amazing. Fabulous. If you can keep this going, I will be astounded - and delighted.

Hey great story. Love the build up in tension. Please keep it going.

I really love this story. The pacing and gradual escalation, the flow of the story, all superbly done. I especially liked the attitude, instead of the "eternal love" pointing towards an impossible wish to marry and have children, it's a game, an experiment based on desire, not excluding other romantic partners.

If I were reading this in a normal book, I would have ripped half the pages in my hurry to read the next dare. Fabulous build-up to incredibly hot sex.

Loved it. Caused me some loss of sleep..

I loved this story. I couldn’t stop reading it. I hope there’s a sequel in the works. I loved the allusion to pegging and would love to see the story evolve and go there and other kinky places.

Great story... Definitely room for more dares... Hell get Becky involved, she seemed eager. Brandon loves Becky and his sis, Sarah has the hots for her brother and her BF, and she simply 'likes' Mike...

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh, yoU NaughtyHottie!!!

yoU got three outta me 2day, showing whatta consumate artist yoU really are!!!!

OMGee, thanks sooo much.

What is it about incest that is so thrill-inducing? When I was in my teens and early twenties, I had some brief incestuous encounters with my sisters. All these years later, they are still among my fondest sexual memories, and we didn't even fuck. Go figure.

Nikki, you are an amazing writer, it’s all about the “slow burn “ Absolutely loved it!😘

Wow. You know how to write. Your story flowed. I liked it was from Sarah's POV. It would have been great if you included Becky in the game. Fucking Sarah while Brandon fucked one of the girls as they 69ed. Great story a bit long but it built the anticipation.

Loved it. Note to read some more of your stories. Very well written!

I think Nicki must be one of the wildest women ever. What a pleasure it would be to have her near me.

OMG - what a great story! Love the slow burn leading to the final deed. If you like this one, try my stories starting with "My Step-Sister, Part 1", I think you'll like it. https://literotica.com/s/my-step-sister-pt-01

I liked the build up of this one, at least at first. It felt kind of natural although clearly there was some underlying attraction and desire there hidden deep. The game simply stirred those feelings up and brought them to surface, amplifying them as time went on. A natural progression and a very hot one, too. Admittedly the loophole shit got really fucking annoying after a while. I felt almost as frustrated as Brandon. I did feel it ended up dragging on for a bit too long to get to what we all expected, but at least it finally did get there. I admit, it could have been shortened significantly and the essence of the story would still have remained. After a while I was beginning to forget they were even brother and sister because nothing of any actual consequence was happening; too much teasing, loopholes and dicking about.

As for some of the other stuff, it's the typical shit. Well hung, muscular, experienced bro, and big-titted, super-hot, horny, no-stranger-to-cock sis. Must be a checklist somewhere when writing this stuff as you rarely see it deviate, and even when you do, it's usually not that far. Somewhat disappointing, but I guess I'm used to it by now.

Not surprised that he ended up railing Becky, who let's be honest, is a bit of a slut (even Sarah basically says it). Maybe if Sarah dicked around less she could have had it instead, but hey, you live and you learn. Of course she fucked Mike, too, so I guess it's "even". Not sure why all these stories has so much fucking other people though. Feels off to me and undermines the vibe a bit, but I guess many other people like it. I just feel like it distracts from the brother/sister aspect of it too much.

The dare stuff was interesting, for the most part at least, but as I've said, it ended up dragging out too much for less payoff than it was worth. And Brandon sucking his own cock was just weird and out of place for me. First I've seen that stuff in a story; didn't do anything for me. Kind of strange that she suggested that as her dare at that point. I felt like they didn't really progress as one might expect. They'd escalate, then go back to something tame, then escalate again... honestly it was annoying after a while. I found myself saying, "for fuck sake hurry up already", on more than one occasion.

Oh, and why wasn't Sarah not on the pill for so long when she's clearly sexually active (even if out of practice a little)? Seen this a few times and it never makes any sense to me. Does she secretly enjoy the risk or something even if she's not letting the guy cum in her? Well at least she did at some point though I was disappointed that Brandon wasn't the first to cum inside her, especially given all the damn build up. This story is just full of disappointment :(

In the end, this story was nothing but a major disappointment for me, on many levels. It turned out to be completely different from what I was expecting. I can't fault the story for what it was and I'm sure it appeals to many, but it just wasn't what I was after. By the time Brandon finally fucked his sister, which was cut disappointingly short as well with no finish (yeah it just kept piling on), it had been too long and they had been too "tainted" by the other parties introduced in the story that it no longer meant anything to me. Like, "oh hey, you finally had shitty sex, took you long enough. You didn't even finish properly. And a bit of a shame you fucked those other people along the way but whatever."

The ending (right after they finally had proper sex to the finish) with the short discussion and cliffhanger-like setup, alright that was well played. It seems like they were beginning to realise they might have deeper feelings for each other but the situation is complicated. I wonder if they end up together or just leave this as a fun game that goes on for who knows who long. A sequel might work if the focus becomes about them exclusively. It could be interesting.

So pleased you got him to wear your knickers...

There were a lot of hot scenes but to be honest, I was just reading through this hoping we’d get to see Sarah actually pegging Brandon. The most we got was Sarah fantasizing about it for a bit instead, which seems unnecessary if you don’t intend to use the fantasy for anything further. Pretty good story but 9 pages of reading “I pegged him” without any actual pegging could have been fixed by just calling the peg a clip or something.

Love it.. lucky guy

For some stupid reason I started thinking of the movie Tag in the middle of this...

A perfect perverted sibling game of tag.