All Comments on 'I Did What?'

I loved your story. It is well written and damn sexy. I wish it had been me!

If you have more drugged and f*cked stories plz send them to me.

Lacem8@aol.com

very exciting.I hope there are more like this one

You are both stupid sluts...you and him both. Any man that can't tell when his wife has gotten fucked needs to be killed. I'll kill him and any wife that is a cheating dumb ass drunken whore needs to be killed..I'll kill her too and any writer tah writes such puke needs to be killed...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Good story line; would have been so much better if you would take more care with you grammer/sentence structure and spelling. Keep writing, you have a great imagination and a knack for the erotic.

All that fucking and Tom did not knock you up? Did he have a low sperm count? Did he tell you that? Imagine all that cum flooding your pussy.....how erotic and hot!

Either a slut or wannabe slut. Love these stories where there is all this cheating and everyone lives happily ever after. Geez amazing how many people have no morals in this world. And just for the record I think cheaters should be kicked out on their ass male or female makes no difference, a cheater is a cheater.

Very Descriptive writing. Enjoyed reading it.

another great story in mind blowing detail. nightsnake

A exciting story well written. Also a caution on leaving your drink unattended.

what happen to his copy of the DVD did his lawyer get it and is she still in hot water

Your stories are very well thought out. Love your descriptions of sex.

I really enjoyed it!! Very convincing, although I was pretty sure is was a "drugged girl" story from the time the friends left, it was still VERY good!

The next step in this fantasy is for Judy to find the CD and to blackmail our hot heroin May into all sorts of evil wanton sex with men, multiple men, women, and multiple women; forcing her to be her own sex slave, who loves her work, not needing the drugs to enjoy her dalliances.

Just love the way your mind thinks. Love your writing. Thanks.

why did you make the protagonist so stupid? almost all LW authors do this.

The premise is an old one, but handled fairly well here. You are especially good with the full abandonment to the joys of rough illicit sex by the young wife. But the effectiveness of the story suffers from your atrocious grammar. A good editing job would have helped considerably. Keep writing, though, and work on verb tense and the like.

I stumbled onto one of your stories (reference made by another Literotica author), and man, I'm done for.

I love your plots and situations. The characters' internal dialogue is really hot, too.

On the down side: lots of typos, or mis-spellings. Not a biggie, but it is a little jolt in the smooth flow of the story.

I've favorited both this story and you as an author. I'm off to read the next one, and the next one...

This was either a pitiful, fictional, journal entry of a ditzy , latent slut or subversive, sly parody of the same. If I were a bit more clever I could tell you which.

"I seen...." Did you graduate from high school?

your story makes my pussy wet while i read i feel myself in your place exciting.

Half illiterate. 1 star !

If the story had just had her way, way overly drunk so she fell into bed with the guy, I would have given it 4 stars. Several comments castigate the grammar, however, you use of such phrases as "I seen" for standard American English "I saw" is actually an upper midwestern dialect variation, so the commentators demonstrate their ignorance. This is Literotica, if a reader comes here looking for 154 fouteen-line poems in iambic pentameter with three quatrains and a rhyming couplet, the reader has made a serious mistake. Nonetheless, even if we aren't here to read Shakespeare, use of more standard American English would allow the reader to read and flow through the story without stopping to notice the dialectal variations. So, I took off another star.

OldJag (my name once the webmaster chooses to register me.)

This date rape drug is a real thing. I loved the way you turned a sad situation into a very hot story...thanks,,,5 stars

but.......you should have someone proof-read the story before you "publish" it. Verbiage like "I seen".......instead of "I saw" etc diminish your work.

I love your dirty mind, but your stories could be better if someone helped you with grammar and spelling.

Although this story was entertaining, you should write a sequel. where the husband finds out and dumps her cheating whore ass out. And then she finds out she IS pregnant with Toms bastard kid. And that Jeff finds a decent woman to rebuild his life with. why leave Jeff as a victim of his slut wife's affair ? because since she loved the sex with Tom she won't be satisfied with her husband's sex anymore anyway. So let Jeff find out what she did for the whole weekend and throws her skank ass out. After all she's nothing less than a skank slut anyway, so, give Jeff some respect that he deserves.

what not, when not, who not, where not and an O Shit. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nice to see the closet cuckies venturing out from LW - good for those insecure virgins to air out their neckbeards.

You wrote the scene for the first night being rape.

The rest of the weekend was COMPLETELY consensual, unrepentant, unprotected cheating cunt sex with no drugs used.

Divorce should be mandatory.

Dr Semblance is right. She had no excuse any more. Plus, how can he possibly be charged with rape when she willingly consentually kept fucking him over and over after the "rape".

good story liked the ending

This is so very far from what would happen in reality. In reality, the wife would have immediately called her husband and told him that her coworker Tom had slipped date rape drugs in her drink after everyone else had left, had driven her home and repeatedly raped her. Then pick up the photos and take them to the ER and have the police called in while they do a tox screen on the wife. Then call your Supervisor and report the rape to the company. Don't be a victim. Don't betray your marriage. Don't become a whore or sex slave to a criminal degenerate. You can ruin his life forever. Being on the Sex Offender Registry for 25 years to Life has a lasting effect on people. I do not find rape stories at all interesting. And that is all that this is. Rape by substance abuse. Rape by blackmail. Rape by coersion. It is all R A P E!!!

But a lot of typo's!! Turn your auto correct OFF! Better yet read your story before you submit it!!

You are in serious need of someone to edit and proofread your work!!

Ok, now that everyone pounded their puds over this story let’s continue shall we...

The police investigation would have, as stated, found the photos and all evidence pertaining to the crime on his computer. Each and every person photographed would have been interviewed by police for possible victim/witnesse to the case before being brought to the State Attorney or District Attorney for prosecution.

That means that little Miss Cum Dumpster would have been found out and unsuspecting hubby (Jeff) would also be interviewed.

Sooooo.... part two of this story is how Jeff found out and then dumped the instant whore !!!

I wonder what would have happened if, when Tom threatened to blackmail May. She would have told him that she had called her husband already and told him what she remembered, and that the pictures were in a safe for when hubby got home. Also that a nurse was on her way to pick her up to have her blood checked as she was still a little dizzy from the night before. Another thing is she could have told Tom that she had told Jeff who took the pictures and where he worked. In closing she could have said. If I was you, I would go home and start packing before Jeff gets back and goes looking for you. Thank you for sharing a great story. Hope you keep writing more of this same type of stories. Not all wife have to be caught.

You are in dire need of a proofreader. Never rely on autocorrect. Simply take the time to read it before submitting it. Quit putting two sentences together as one.

Also, the story is not plausible. The very moment that I question that I got passed out drunk on so little alcohol, my suspicions go way up. Anything that endangers my marriage are immediately addressed with my husband. Not kept secret from him.

I would have gone to the police and filed a report; otherwise I'd be risking the news coming out with me having no control over it. If Judy knows about the night at the bar, others would do. This story has more holes than Swiss cheese.

In the story you did say that she was on the pill but you should have added that her emotions got so messed up while he was staying with her that she forgot to take them.

I read on the internet that the pill works by stopping ovulation, and if you miss a couple of pills, you could become pregnant because your body will suddenly ovulate. Some doctors even say that you are most fertile right when you stop taking the pill.

Some good descriptive writing... just tighten it up a bit. It’s arousing , just polish it.

If you can't spell, why not use spellcheck. The word is spelled WHILE. Illiteracy is not a good thing for a wood-be author

I'm continually floored by critics who say how much they hate her stories, but admit they're very familiar with her work. If you don't like her stuff why do you read every word? If I'm reading something and it's not my cup of tea I click on the "x" in the top right hand corner and move on to another author's work.

I prefer hot wife stories, but I thought this was a hot read (yes, there is bad grammar, I'll live) and liked the twist at the end that got Tom out of her life.

...is for communication of messages. This story was concise and not at all confusing in telling it's narrative. To get bogged down in the minutia of details over the message is antisocial and does not make anyone look smart. It is similar to someone telling you "if your in trouble ain't nothing stopping me from helping you. Let me no and Ill be their." And instead you refuse any help because of the way it was written.

Your story just made it to my favourite list. I just LOVE your storytelling. You have a talented Erotic imagination. Keep them coming. Thanks.

Could and does happen in real life! 10 years not enough! If he could fuck like that why use drugs?

Wow!!!

The absolutely the best story I've read Hot stimulating

Please continue writing these stories I promise I will read everyone of them

All those commenting on the narrative.. Just stop it. Whats the point? The author decided that this is the story. Thats it. Even if you criticize the story, than come up with a better solution or more plausible option that still keeps the big picture the same (Tom has sex with a reluctant-to-have-sex-with-him May).

Other than that the grammar and syntaxis is at times awful. Get your stories proofread by any of us. It will make them much more enjoyable to read.

I did not like the drug part and Tom getting arrested, It would have been better if she had done what she did because she was drunk. Also Tom should have actually fallen in love with her. I also think when her husband Jeff came home they decided to start trying to make a baby so she went off the pill. The effects of the pill lasted the several weeks they fucked so she didn't get pregnant, and then Jeff was told he had to go on another long business trip. At work Tom overheard her talking to Judy that Jeff was going to be gone for a long time. The day she dropped Jeff of at the airport she got home and Tom's was waiting for her and the whole saga occured again and continued until Tom knocked her up. Jeff returned and before her baby bump started to show she told Jeff he was going to be a daddy.

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Whore

So she helps the prosecution of the her rapist, but never tells her husband, and gets aroused and thinks about it every time she gets off with her husband? Wow...... he would leave her for sure if found out. It's an interesting story, albeit unfinished as is most of this author's work. My own belief is that this secret would come out sooner or later, and the later would implode the marriage. Certainly would for me. If she was getting horny at memories of her rape, and secretly imposed them on the husband, then she needed help. It's not a matter of male ego but violation of marital intimacy. If he is just her biological dildo, then it's not true intimacy. Husband as masturbatory device. Fuck that.

Wow......... She never told or confessed a drug-assisted rape to her husband? Speaking of a time bomb! Sooner or later it will come out when she lets slip while drunk, asleep, or fucking away. Then the husband would likely divorce her. I would, knowing as another commenter put it, I was just her marital dildo. Imagine having to get a DNA test for a kid with that slut. Just.... Wow.

WOW!!!! Another fantastically well-written tale!! Great job!! Love your descriptive style!

Would be great if you were to write more stories