All Comments on 'I Hate Surprises Ch. 01'

Another stupid story of the "Dumb Man". This story must have ben writen by a Homo or woman.

I'll hold off on my opinion of the story until its conclusion. And, no, I do not agree with the previous poster's opinion. There is a lot of conflict in someone who goes through something like this. There is also no roadmap. I know first hand the feeling of both wanting to hold on tight with both hands, and throttle the life out of her with the same hands.

As a side note, please don't let this be a clone of House of Cards. While a good story line, a different solution would be better. The difference between forgiveness and failure can be defined simply as, "did I catch them, or was I told?"

Well written as usual. An interesting take on her need for attention rather than a desire for sex.

I hope this story continues to be as well written and interesting as it has started.....

Looking forward to more.

I have to agree with the other comments that the story was well done, it flowed very well and it even had a plot. I vote for grammar as well as content. Not only was it well written, but the content was very good. However; for the live of me, I cannot understand why a husmand or wife would take the other back after they had found them lying and cheating. This was the right time for the marriage to end because without TRUST, there cannot be a marriage.

p.s.: I liked the revenge on the loan officer.

I hope the following chapter(s)leave us feeling that your strong talent and effort is also credible in the end.

You are appreciated for the theme of marital consequence and it's taxing and complex difficulties.

Ohio:

You do have the ability to spin a fine tale. I eagerly await ch. 02 to see where this is headed. Ronnie W.

Ohio is becoming another consistent author. Since the last section was titled "Jennie's First Affair" I suppose we have more to look forward to. Jennie apparantly regards sex as the price she must pay to get the male attention she feels she deserves. Since the sex isn't that important to her, deep down she doesn't think it should be that important to her husband.

That's a theory I'm working on.

I like your writing. Sounds like you almost understand women but we know that isn't possible.

The problem I always have is I can't buy this flattering seduction of a married woman. At least within a loving marriage. A single woman, yes. A married woman with a little girl should have more feeling of responsibility than to jump into bed with ANYONE but her husband. My feeling here is the old cheaters line. Once a cheater, always a cheater. She wasn't drunk, she wasn't drugged. She just plain associated the attention she received to going to bed with the one paying the attention to her. In fact, I find it hard to believe that this is the only time it has happened. I am sure that attention has been given to her before.

This lad is in for trouble no matter which way he goes. Divorce is a mess with the resentments and the children seperated from one parent. But if he stays with her he will going throuh this again. And that could bring red hot rage and hate.

But, I am very interested in seeing how the author is going to play through this problem.

The husband has to do something to really get through to the wife that her action is not acceptable for a marriage. I don't think she sees that. She is sorry, now, but will she be sorry about doing it tomorrow? She needs to KNOW, deep down, that her action could easily wind up with her being alone, the husband and child gone. Therefore, I think he needs to file divorce action.

Good writing, BTW.

These characters aren't nearly interesting enough to justify the enormous amount of dull verbiage you devote to them. There's no LIFE in this story!

Its OK to have a dissenting or contrary opinion, but at least have the balls to sign your name. If I were the writer, I would cheerfully ignore anonymous rantings. Grow a set.

thanks for writing a outline of your story and the people involved.i can understand the love this man has for his woman by what you have wrote.one ann half chapters couldn't do that.i'm enjoying this story and the plot keep writing.you have a fan base, so don't get mad when people act like assholes.

You're more in control of the sentences and paragraphs. The story is also more realistic.

Very well written, what i like most is how this could happen in real life.I am looking forward to the rest

The 50 I rated it was an average between a 100 for style and grammar, and a 0 for the subject. It's a barely credible story...but, so what? It appears that you are very occupied by the topic, perhaps exorcising some demons of your own. I have a feeling that Jennie does it to feel debased/dirty and thereby feel liberated from the adoration she routinely received. I could be wrong. At any rate, she has crossed boundaries and violated a trust that will ALWAYS stay violated and which will never really heal. He should get out of the relationship and fight for custody. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Personality disorders cannot be fixed.

I have mixed feelings about your work, but there is a lot of native talent displayed. Your dialoge, especially from her, occasionaly rings false and at times you make her seem a little dull witted. The emotions are complex and he is interesting and a little spooky in his manipulation of someone he supposedly loves. They maybe deserve each other? You have left me curious to see where their lives lead them and how the story ends and by any standard, that is successful writing. I look forward to reading the rest. :)

but as usual the Neanterthals out there don't understand the complexities of writing this kind of story however. They live in a binary world. Umm wife cheat, divorce wife and self destruct. Or Ummmm wife cheats - me like, want to watch!

While can't say I have enjoyed every story the author wirtes I can say I see consistency here. The characters are believeable. I wasn't too happy about the inordinate time spent of explaining the womans character quirks but it was understandable. It did meld into the story. I have known women like this; completely self-absorbed. They see no further than their own needs and wants. (yes men too!)

I also accept the man's standpoint. He has a trophy wife, a trophy child, a trophy life. Who wants to give that up willingly? You would tend to overlook certain pecularities in a persons character. However, she did know exactly what she was doing and I hope the protagonist remembers this and addresses it.

I will be looking forward to the next installment. :-)

Regards,

You, Ohio, are full of shit. Write the fucking story without all the useless crap. You don,t need to go on for ever about the beauty of this slut. Make your point and move on. There was so much bullshit that I didn't finish the story. It was boring not erotic.

Let me get this straight. She had sex, which she doesn't particularly enjoy, with a guy she doesn't particularly like because he paid attention to her? Gives a whole new spin on Attention Deficit Disorder.

She's a wife, a mother, and has a full time job and a husband who tries his best to keep surprising her and she is willing to engage in meaningless (to her) sex to keep this guy paying attention to her?

And he thinks that because she is "sorry" this won't happen again? This woman has a whole set of issues that are going to require a great deal of couch time to resolve - if they ever are. Yeah it's tough to give up the "perfect life" but guess what pal - it ain't so perfect. Forgiveness is permission to do it again and from the 'first affair' indicator he's about to get kicked in the teeth again. First time shame on you, second time...

My only wish is that I could read the whole thing rather than having to wait for the next two-thirds.

I speak from exactly the same experience. We're all different, but as for me, I never learned to trust her again. Going home for the sake of the child doesn't always work. In fact, I do not trust many people. Hate is not always a destroyer. I learned to use it's energy, to feed off it. You can still love your child and be in her life, but not have to deal with the bitch......or at least deal on your terms. She couldn't keep her legs closed while he was trying to make a good living for them......fuck her!

Very well written with great plot structure. The only negative I feel is envy of the talent of the author. I wish I had his skill. I look forward eagerly to more chapters of this tale.

Excellent start. Looking forward to the next two installments.

The writing is better than your first story. No filler.

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playingcardcompany

So far this is just another cheating story, no different from about six million others on literotica.

Boy, he saw her in the hotel lobby???

We already know she cheats again on or near their 25th wedding anniversary. She is a stupid woman, and what a pity all these cheating writers can only achieve their story with a stupid woman.

I will read more to see how Ohio manages to keep them together, if he can.

At least we have an author here who isn't frightened to give us a decent chunk of story to read, though I would prefer the lot in one go so I can read it and move on to something else.

Anonymous Bullshit wrote:

You, Ohio, are full of shit. Write the fucking story without all the useless crap. You don,t need to go on for ever about the beauty of this slut. Make your point and move on. There was so much bullshit that I didn't finish the story. It was boring not erotic.

The comment is bullshit. Write the fucking comment without all the useless crap. Here is the comment rewritten to be useful:

I thought there was too much extraneous material in the story. In the limited space of a short story, you can't afford to take the time on things not relevant to the plot or characters like (give a concrete example). I didn't see the relevance to the plot or her characterization of her beauty. The unnecessary material made me put the story down without finishing. It also killed the eroticism for me and made it tedious.

Then vote your 0%. Believe me, that message is as clear as the virulence you posted.

She is a plastic actress which even she doesn't seem to understand (or does she?)- She can't live without the lights and the applause as it is her reason to go on or so it seems.

However when she indicates that the sex wasn't very good - implies that she just sorta lays there - that it wasn't all that arousing - the actress is playing a part to a degree not know yet.

A small qibble - he let her off too early by her staged relaxed reaction - as though she said to herself "that was easier than I thought". But then we wouldn't have the rest of the story would we!

Your talent and theme is appreciated author - with high Regard

I can already smell trouble.

The story so far is extremely well told, but by labeling it as her first affair, we already know they are getting back together. We did not need to know that yet.

The wife's excuse is extremely ridiculous, so I cannot imagine a real life for them together.

I know that the author has already submitted the entire story, so there is nothing he can do (even if he wanted to) to improve the story. I also know it is hard to rate a story based on third of it, so I am taking my best guess.

The wife's behavior was very irresponsible. Usually there is no way you can change the personality of someone that (supposedly) mature. Furthermore, the author has already told us it would not work out.

It is relatively trivial (for talented authors) to make a great story start, but it is very challenging even for the most talented authors to pull an entire story together and give it a realistic ending. Even K.K. fails at that every once in a while. This story already shows signs of unrealisticity.

I can only hope it is better than House of Cards.

Thanks for writing. Keep it up.

A lot of bullshit in this story and the Pill made it worse.

read this story from beginning to end. the author laid out the whole story in the very beginning. the psychology of all the characters involved was develped in the very beginning. jennie was a very beautiful young lady. dumped by stephen, her older, charming, sophisticated, gentle, considerate, and very knowledgeable lover. her only power and confidence in life came from her beauty. it was her invincible armor. stephen put a crack in that armor. brad took advantage of it by not drooling all over her like his competitors. take a strong look at brad, he didn't win her with his possitive attributes. he won her by ignoring her and working on her weakness. take a strong look at the two affairs, just substitutes for stephen, she was still trying to fill that crack in her armor. everyone in this story is weak and shallow, but then again, so are a lot of people in real life. can we blame brad in the long run. considering brad won the trophy prize, and probably didn't really qualify. how hard it would be to give it up in real life. the odds of being able to replace her, would be astronomical for him. remember, in the beginning of the story, there was only one jennie, and everyone wanted her. especially after 18 years, so much time invested. so much physical change in everyone. to the author, you have very good insight to life and people, really enjoy your stories. keep them coming.

I wouldnt waste the money on any shrinks just dump her.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Make her give up her job then have her watched every day.then divorce the tramp.

Atlanta,Ga

good story, well written

anxiously waiting for the ending

Now you have set the scene but it sounds as if basically he is tied through Diane and he could rapidly lose his enthusiasm for giving lots of attention to a woman that does not put him first. He is going to have to split that 24 million dollars with her and if he had divorced her at the first and only affair he could keep more.

Anyway nicely put in play....

husband had the pre marriage instances, and this anderson matter. he should have avoided her futher adventures and hollow words

Take away her beauty and just mabe she might loose a little of her slutability. lol!!!!

Not that easy to give up a woman such as she is described. But maybe all you Brad Pitts have no shortage of replacements out there. Wetapap has the right take on the story. My second wife was a beautiful but flawed woman like this one. Very little interest in sex and self absorbed. She loves attention and gives it out freely, dotes on her chidren excessively. Thank goodness she hangs on to only me. She knows she is attractive to men, but she is too insecure to be with anyone else but me. That type of women does not cheat normally. Mine doesn't and I half-assed expected her to for 30 years.

A mistake may be a marriage mainly they have children, however the second mistake.....

I'm looking forward to future chapters and whenever they may take us.

As a point of interest, Ohio, below is one example where you confused the names of the characters that you might wish to correct.

Error:

"So what do you want now, Diana? Do you love him?"

Correction:

"So what do you want now, Jennie? Do you love him?"

In addition, thanks for taking the time and effort to create this fine piece and then sharing here with us.

Take Care!

old

D Wornock, are you so lonely, and have such a low self esteem that you need to constantly put writers on this site down, or is it simply the fact your dick is so small you're not getting any?

Ohio, your one of the best writers here, but even when you think you're being a hard ass. Your not, you're a WACC/RAAC writer. This story proves it. That there are three parts to this story it just goes to show thqat she's going to cheat again. And reguardless of all the psycobabble you put in your stories. In the end the wife is still a lying cheating slut and the husband is a wimp.

the wife is just another predictable slut who cheats again. Similar but not as pathetic as MattM's bullshit stories.

She's clearly a whore (fucks for compensation) and he is clearly a spineless wimp. Likely she will give him AIDS, they both will die and leave the child without parents. Probably best than having a whore mother and a spineless father.

We have a cheating cunt slut wife and a budding cuckold husband. It better get better than this. We'll see...

he guzzled thick jizz, got his cornhole buggered, betrayed!

Is anyone surprised that the selfish cunt whose never worked for anything in her life cheated on him? I wish Ohio stopped telling us how beautiful she is, we get it she's s good looking woman that's nice but I see attractive women every day they don't make me stop what I'm doing or walk into things do I have a problem with the story right there as it seems unrealistic.

Just as the Husband said when he found out, she is a cold hearted cheating bitch! He is a mindless fool who deserves her. The cheating whore wife I bet Fucking a dead fish would be more satisfying

The comments on this story are so negative I think they must be a joke. It is hard to believe that so many guys read these stories just so they can get angry when it is not a "burn the bitch" ending.

there is a 100% chance that the wife is going to cheat again. if she was so gorgeous, when she starts to age, she would inevitably seek attention from anyone EXCEPT her husband.

and of course the last page of the chapter is called her 1st affair.

And the ones that say it will happen again are right. I have often thought that if I could somehow live as long as a tree I might figure it out, but I am wrong. The only thing that you can do is enjoy what you get and keep your wallet chained or well hidden.

BUT WITH HER MOMMYs ATTITUDE ITS A WASTED EFFORT, tk u mlj lv nv

So beauty is only skin deep, eh? If you are pretty enough you can cheat or not go to jail like down in Florida. So what do big tits get you other than a handful to tit flesh?

Well written but the premise is questionable.

because I absolutely will never go to NY city or Paris.

My tuff luck I suppose.

First off, the background how a couple first met should be shorter than the story itself. The background should never be over a page. I see there are 3 chapters to this story. Why? This entire story could have been wrapped up, in a four, at the very most 5 page story. I gave this story 2 stars.

Nice story. I love Ohio's stories. They seem to make you feel like they actually happened. He is always true to the character's feeling, and he usually wraps the stories up in a believable ending. Nice job

I can't believe I found an Ohio story I haven't read before! Just when I thought I had exhausted them all. This is sizing up to be a real winner.

introduction ruined this one. could not finish after finally getting thru the intro.

Maybe she was the most beautiful girl in the world in your idolizing, idolatry, mind only.

terrible for you.

I'm a cheater. I'm so sorry. It will never happen again. I want to make it up to you. It had nothing to do with you. It was only sex. I'll do anything you want. Every cliche every cheating slut has used from the being of time. The things she can't give you? Your trust in her. Removal of her stepping out of the hotel room and kissing another man from your memory. I don't care how beautiful she is. Once a cheater, always a cheater. She'll hide it better next time. I wouldn't believe a word coming out of her mouth. And the best he'll do? Is 50/50, living in a cheap apt. while she stays in the house with physical custody of their daughter until she's 18. You may not have done anything wrong but the Courts are about to screw you.

nuther the most bee you ti full bitch in the entire universe tale

1star for the dreamer author.

Good story written a few years ago and read it again, it reminds me of two things said to me when I was very young. ''Some people never grow up'' and ''Sometimes beauty is only skin deep''.

im sure something like this could actually happen. there are women with beauty and brains, and its true they sometimes intimidate the male specie. will start ch2 now.

"JENNIE'S FIRST AFFAIR"

Therein lies the problem. It should have read, "Jennie's affair." Singular. After the first one she should have found herself skidding down the street on her skanky ass with the door slamming behind her.

A whore is a whore.

No having the whore checked for STD's? Or AIDS? No matter how beautiful, their cunt is still just an incubation unit for bugs that kill.

But she didn't really seem like she was feeling extreme guilt about cheating. When she was telling him about her affair, she had the same amount of emotion in her voice as if she were reading a grocery list. Why would he want to stay with an emotional cripple that isn't really upset that she cheated?

She was BEAUTIFUL? So what! The world is full of Beautiful Whores! Sadly, it is also full of Cuckolds who take all the Shit that those Whores dish out!

rediculous to say a person proberly seen not more than 4 more butifuol woman than her only doing normal daily routines i proberly come across 20/30 tousand people a day and live in a quite village in the netherlands it would allmost be rediculous to say i dont ran across 1 such woman a day!

sorry for my bad english :)

“it wasn't very much.” – It maybe wasn’t “very” much, but it was TOO much.

"I want you back. I want our marriage back.” – He’s going to continue to travel on business, she’s going to continue to feel neglected, how is she going to keep from seeing other guys?

At the beginning he's seen evidence of her and her lover in their home, you mentioned "First Affair", where's the "Second (or more) Affair" and the end?

Sorry, I forgot that there were more parts!

. whooped ti do, i am so impressed i just took a shit in the forest full of beeutefull trees.

2.5 starie eyed stars.

how about being grounded. TK U MLJ LV NV

ohio the cuck who is proud to be married to most beeutitiful slut in whole wide universe.

1 cuck slut star for the biggest cuck luving author in the universe.

1 star

Still five stars. Still love it. Not a lot of heartfelt remorse from the wife.

"Jennie decided to study for her realtor's license and work selling houses." - Working in real estate, the bane of Loving Wives!

I'm sorry, I'm buying the "lack of attention" excuse. She's a grown woman, not a teen-ager who SHOULD understand the way of the world. And isn't SHE the one who knows how to handle come-ons?

"But she knows how desirable she is; and she understands that for men, the only culmination of a romantic evening of seduction is a night in bed." - Who cares what the only culmination is for the man? She's a married woman,if Marlon has to go home with a case of blue balls, tough shit for him!

"He invited me for a 'long lunch', but I knew what he had in mind." - You KNEW what he had in mind and went anyway?! That's unforgivable!

Divorce her u idiot. ONCE A CHEATER, ALWAYS A CHEATER! Everyone knows that.LOL

BUT, it should have ended with him taking the daughter and leaving . He already gave her a couple of chances and she obviously has no long term memory.

She is going to cheat again it is in her DNA.

Sometimes there's such a thing as too much background. And sometimes all that background causes people to lose interest in the story, or forget the first part of the story that kind of gives the story direction, or just gets them confused. And then they

wonder if they should even bother with the rest of it. I know that's what I'm thinking.

Of a pathetically selfish, shallow cheating whore and her pathetically impotent, when it comes to her, wimp cuckold of a husband.

Ugh.

What losers.

A high maintenance selfish disrespecting lying white is not marriage material. She's proven that she can't be trusted and yet he doesn't just drop her and leave. I guess she thought she could fuck the guy in front of her husband? Did she think of his feelings? Did she put him first? The answer to the last is a big NO, and therefore she doesn't truly love him. I wonder how many times it will take before it finally sinks in and he leaves her. I'm guessing 3 or 4.

standard wimp + whore crap.

I have a hard time relating to this story and how badly he wants to reconcile. I know there is a child, but a cheater is a cheater.

I saw my wife drive past me in another man's car. I knew who he was, and the car was one-of-a-kind. Well, at least the paint job was. We had been married 3 years and thought everything was fine. She was loving, nothing had changed as far as I could tell. We had sex five or six times each week, often more than once per session. She was passionate, giving and swore her love for me. Unlike 'Jennie', she wasn't beautiful in the classic sense but pretty and her figure was to die for. Seriously, she was 5'2", 105lbs and I took her measurements myself. 34"-22"-36". The perkiest tits with nice big nipples...but I digress.

I had to make a delivery for my boss because our regular delivery man called in sick. I was about halfway across town on my way back and stopped for a coffee. I had to cross the street at a stoplight and when I returned to my truck, that damned car was first in line at the light. It caught my attention and I looked in at the two lovebirds. It was my wife and she was pressed up against him on the bench seat of the old car. She was kissing his neck and I could see where the other hand was probably in his lap. Instead of crossing with everyone else, I walked right to the car window. There I could see his stiff cock in her hand as she jacked him right there in public.

Ellen saw me and froze. Looking back I suppose I was frozen too, by the shock of what I was seeing. We locked eyes and she fell back away from her boyfriend, leaving his cock spurting into the air. I hurried for the company truck and drove away long after the light had turned green and the road was clear. The moment I walked into the office, I told my boss I was quitting. He took me back to his private office where I turned into a basket case. Ellen and I had begun working on a baby. A baby that would never be.

Long story shorter, he got me a transfer from Georgia to Flagstaff, Arizona. It was going to take two weeks but I was done at our home office immediately. I hurried for home and began packing. Thankfully my wife and the guy she was jacking were probably still back at her place of work. She had mentioned a supplier had stopped by and turned out to be a man she had went to high school with. I'd seen that car in many pictures in her HS annual.

I drove, and still do, a '72 Chevy 3/4 ton 4 wheel drive pickup. I bought the truck after a guy went through it and made it look like it had just drove off the showroom floor. It has a 327 V8 and a 4 speed transmission. It's candy apple red with a bit of flake in it and I'd had a canopy made for it to match. Before my wife could come home at the end of the day, they must have been on a lunch break, I had my truck loaded with everything I wanted and was pulling out at 4:00. She didn't get home until 5:15.

Of course my cellphone was loaded with calls from her. I hadn't even thought of it because when I clock in at work, cellphones are shut off and I'd not started mine again. The first few messages was only her crying, trying to talk. At some point Ellen composed herself and told me she would try to explain. It hurt to hear her voice.

I never took her calls nor answered any texts. I drove for three days before pulling into Flagstaff. I'd left our checking and savings accounts untouched and she could keep our rental. My boss gave me the company credit card and asked me just to be careful with it. I was good until I received my first paycheck.

Each time I checked my phone, I deleted all of her messages without listening or reading any. Each day there were less until after about four months, I was only getting one each morning and another in the evening. I didn't listen to them, to hear her voice was like a icepick in my heart. After eight months I was getting one per week and at the one-year anniversary, they stopped.

From what I understand, we're still married even some 4 1/2 years later. She looked for me but my boss ran interference and told her I quit, just as I asked. Friends didn't hide they still talked to me and let her know I was doing fine but they wouldn't intercede in her behalf.

I suppose she kept the affair going because she has a kid now, he's about 4, I guess. She swears to our friends and my family it was only short term and was ended the moment I saw her. I really don't care. Even if the only thing she did was kiss his neck and jack him off, that was enough.

You know what hurts the most? Other than I can't trust a woman ever again? The smile of joy on her face while she kissed his neck, whispered in his ear while pounding his cock. That fucking smile.

She's in love with being "romanced", she's in love with being "loved." She'll never get past this in her mind; it's an important part of her, this wanting to be adored and showered with constant compliments from worshiping males. She needs it like she needs oxygen; one husband will NEVER be able to provide all the glorious feedback about her beauty that she's craving.

Furthermore, I've never seen, let alone met, a woman as beautiful as you attempted to describe. I once worked closely, over a two year period, with a lady who resembled a younger and prettier Shania Twain (the 1995 version of Twain). Never once was I tempted to cheat on my wife with this gorgeous lady. Funny, beautiful, a hardbody, but that's not enough to throw away a wife and three kids. Not all men worship at the feet of beautiful women like the wimps in Ohio's stories.

Jeeze Ohio, grow a pair, why don't ya? Why are almost all the men in your stories pussies? And for the men who DO divorce their wives, why do you write them as cold-hearted bastards who apparently never really loved their wives at all? They're so nonchalant about burning the bitch, it's like they were looking for a reason to dump them. As much as I hate divorce, sometimes it actually makes sense. Sometimes it's the intelligent decision, even when you love them dearly. You don't have to have a divorce in every story, just write the men as if they really are men, not some bunch of sobbing sisters getting pushed around by "pretty" wives. Damn!

No way that he can ever trust the self-absorbed bitch again! Thinking back,she'd probably been porked by that professor way back when.He just didn't catch her with the cum oozing down her legs then.

At this point,the daughter seems to be the excuse the cuck is using for staying with a wife who is out of his league,and is probably being banged by half the local beer-belly softball league!

End the misery now,unenlightened cuck!

faggot cuckold takes the whore back after her LONG history of cheating then catching her in the act ?

what a pussy , guess he likes having an aids-whore for a hotwife . loves that 2nd hand snatch . thats the only excuse .

The real issue here is her beauty has always given her a pass, she has led a charmed life (even if it is cursed at some levels). She is the self spoiled princess - it is all about her and what she wants. Again, she wants Brad back and the marriage to be a fairy tail but she has no concept how to do it.

She is cheating for self indulgence not even sex - if Brad comes back she WILL cheat again since she is so easily led into a bad. She is only remorseful at being caught and now due to the comfort/stability the marriage gives HER.

Missing in this story is any impact of both grandparents and of Dobie. She has no close friends to counsel her - all women are intimidated by her looks?

you want to be happy for the rest of your life

don't make a pretty woman your wife

Jimmy Soul

or

Kid Creole and the Coconuts

Wives, take heed. If you are having sex outside of your marriage, you have replaced your husband with another man. No? If your husband walked in, could you...would you continue and have sex with both men so husband isn't left out. And don't dare say that you love your husband even though you were just having sex with the other man. Sex for just the pleasure of having sex is the definition of whore. Not many husbands would want to return to a marriage with a wife who is now, by definition, a whore.

We are told repeatedly that Jennie is not superficial or high maintenance yet she proves time and again otherwise. I mean really, she needs a certain quota of fawning and attention. And if she doesn't get it from Brad, she doesn't see it a problem to get it from someone else? And doesn't even consider it might be wrong or what effect it will have on someone she supposedly loves.

She is obviously an extremely selfish person. She doesn't think about her promises, her vows, her marriage, or her daughter and instead goes with the flattery.

And Brad seems to be a man with little self confidence and esteem no matter what the author says. He gets a promise, she breaks it, he doesn't want to lose her so there must be another promise, which of course gets broken, and on and on. Nothing but a lifetime of heartache in store for Brad.

I don't feel sorry for Brad in the least at this point. I also do not see Jennie as a victim, which seems to be implied. She deliberately cheated. She deliberately lied, had sex, and disrespected her husband. That is not love, no matter what the author wants you to believe.

The most obvious thing Brad said was to act as if he is in the room. She continually disregards that promise and Brad keeps taking her back. No wonder she keeps cheating. No real remorse, otherwise she would have stopped in college.

Pathetic and I'm guessing this becomes an RAAC story, contrary to what should actually happen.

is they touch that 'insecurity nerve' every closet cuckold trolling these boards carries deep inside - no wonder his stories have so many views and comments

you suddenly changed her name..."So what do you want now, Diana? Do you love him?"...no excuse for that....

She habitually is late for dates without considering the disrespectful attitude that exhibits.

He will take her back but she will do it again and he will take her back etc etc etc

She is narcissist and he is so enthralled with her beauty and so enjoys how jealous other men are that he will continue to enable her.

According to husband she is not very sexual...and despite his statements to the contrary she is high maintenance. Constantly in need of attention and flattery.

Better to marry that very cute girl next door who loves having sex with you than semi-frigid Barbie

Is a sure fire way to cure the "i still love her" part of this shit. I don't think a real person could have any affection even for the memory of the person they loved whil wondering if they'd ever been faithful. Thinking back, was she off fucking someone else that time she said she was with one of her girlfriends? No the bitch would have simply have to be kicked to the curb.

Ya right, she's being cheating on Brad since College. And she's cheating on him still, not just this one time, guaranteed

Same General Theme, She only Cheated this "ONE" time & He SHOULD forgive Her.

Yeah Right, I think London Bridge is still available

Wish for more stories like this with couples working together to salvage a blunder.

Great, hold-your-attention story so far.

Announcing JENNY'S FIRST AFFAIR is mistake. Now we know what is coming -- at least 2 affairs.

Paul in Oklahoma

.... RAAC writers and ohio is the King of these pathetic, closet dwelling, cheating WHORE wife Apologist losers.

JPB, MOREAU, AND OHIO: Undisputed masters of wimp cuck crap.

At least this time, the cuck husband punched the boyfriend.

Taking her back will be the biggest fuck up of his life. Dump her ass now and save yourself the trouble later. 2* for his fucking pussy attitude.

This guy is a joke. He thinks of himself as some kind of bad-ass, and then he sits around crying in his beer wondering what he did to make his wife cheat. What a waste of human flesh. And instead of actually doing something, he just sits around, pondering, and rationalizing. I can’t read any more of this. One star for this chapter, and I won’t bother with any more of it.

Just because she is extraordinarily beautiful doesn't make her one bit less of a whore. My younger sister is beautiful like Jennie. She is not only the most beautiful woman in town; she is the most beautiful in the entire area. How beautiful? She dated (translate: had sex with) close to 30 boys in high school. She stole several of my boyfriends. She cheated on her first husband with several men; and is currently cheating on her second husband (and I believe one of those other men is my husband.) Once a cheater...always a cheater.