All Comments on 'I, Jennifer Ch. 04'

I feel all warm and fuzzy now.

Michele, that was quite a story. A real page turner - couldn't put it down. Also it's refreshing to find a writer that is proficient using the English language and correct punctuation. Keep up the Great Work. Phil

Quote: “Michele that was a real page turner - couldn’t put it down.” I have to agree with the previous comment there. I’ve just read the story all in one go.

Quote: “Also it’s refreshing to find a writer that (who) is proficient using the English language and correct pronunciation.” 🤔🙄😳. Obviously written by someone whose first language isn’t English. 😂

You are a very good story teller, Michele. One of the best I have come across on here. As you know I’ve read other stories by yourself and they, like this one, are actually a story with the sex added as a bonus, rather than the other way round.

Still the usual silly mistakes. The one that sticks in my mind most is “grotesque preparations.” But your skill as a story teller still gets you a 5⭐️