by secretsxywriter
Both of your K & J stories are easy to read, move well and smoothly. I'd prefer more
background. Why did Jenna not tell Kat about her year abroad? Why does she work for an old classmate? Why are the two isolated? A relationship built on only sex and mutual attraction is like a candle in the wind. How many relationships did Jenna burn through before she realized that her missing piece was Kat?
I'm really enjoying this. I was a little worried when Lucio showed up with the groceries because guys in a lesbian story are a huge turn off for me ... but thank goodness nothing happened there. ~ L
The first two chapters were excellent. I'm hoping we get more of Kat and Jenna very soon. This story has me captivated and I'm excited to see where this story goes, and how Kat gets over her lost marriage.
Excellent story!
I loved that, your story is not simply just lesbian. I think, Kat shoul do more with Lucio, before Jenna arrives, but that great too. I can't wait to have enough time to read the next chapter.
Loved the story, Kat's uncertainty, etc. I was a bit surprised Jenna got mad so quick: maybe more backstory put in to explain how patient she'd been.
Lucio, a bit too rushed, too cliché. Maybe keep it all in Kat's head (imagines the seduction, cock, sex, etc.) except maybe one kiss, that'd be enough to infuriate Jenna.
The K/J writing is all lovely.
Omg i hateeeeeee it when he keeps on thinking about Danny sh*t .. Sorry author for my bad language lol .. But i really love the story
Again, the writing is beyond good but the hurtful words during the blowup, Kat groping and almost sleeping with the first man she saw, the apologies, straight to make-up sex, turn my nose up.
Oops, I accidentally sent the first one before I was done. At any rate, the last of what I was going to say is what happened in this chapter is the chance a lesbian takes when dating a heterosexual woman. A chance the woman will go back to men. A chance she will follows her heart and just fall...
Love is our life destiny
Well written and so much passion and feeling. I love it! Thank you!
I don't get it. Kat travels 4700 miles for an idyllic Lesbian Honeymoon (see story tags), spends a week of bliss alone with Jenna, and then dry humps the first strange, unknown cock that happens to walk through the door??? While on a "Honeymoon" with Jenna? I agree with ReefBeach. It is one thing to fantasize, and completely different for Kat to follow through and act. Lucky for Kat that she is Jenna's first (and only?) love. I do trust that you will make things right as we move on. Five Stars by the way. Thanks.