All Comments on 'I Knocked'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 2 years ago

Sweet and sexy (except for the C-PAP - never could get used to mine!). Thanks much.

phlxxlphlxxlalmost 2 years ago

Short but very nice. I especially like the part about the grandchildren calling her "grandmom". That's a fantastic feeling. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome. You truly tell a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story, touching! Thank you. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66almost 2 years ago

What a sweet story. Well done. 5 stars.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69almost 2 years ago

Sounds like a wonderful life,

RanDog025RanDog025almost 2 years ago

Great story! 5 BIG FAT STARS!

DSolomonDDSolomonDalmost 2 years ago

Dammit, I love a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you.

Bronco56Bronco56almost 2 years ago

Very sweet and sexy story. Loved it. 5stars

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

I am a sucker for romance

Hiram325Hiram325almost 2 years ago

Great story. Says what needed to be said.

AileyInnAileyInnalmost 2 years ago

This is a good one! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A short, feelgood story. I loved it. Thanks

TrambakTrambakalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant. They really took long!

AngelRiderAngelRideralmost 2 years ago

It's simply not possible that a story on literotica actually penetrated my armor. Much more likely the smoke from my neighbors campfire is causing the tears in my eyes. Maybe its dust from this drought. Yes, that must be it.

Seriously JW, that was absolutely lovely and so very relatable to me personally. I remember that vulnerable feeling and fear followed by absolute joy. My husband wasn't a long term friend, more an acquaintance shared by friends. Still, the rest is pretty damn close right up to putting yourself out there terrified. Thank you.

CamraUzerCamraUzeralmost 2 years ago

What a lovely little piece.

Thank you for writing it.

Regguy69Regguy69almost 2 years ago

Nicely done. I wonder how often we miss opportunities in life because we are afraid to risk a little bit of ourselves. The emotions were well written! I’ve been hurt by “risking it” and I've been greatly rewarded. Thanks for reminding me of that journey.

TonyspencerTonyspenceralmost 2 years ago

Very sweet, loved it.

JustaSailorJustaSailorover 1 year ago

Just words but selected well and arranged to great effect.

lflyer82lflyer82over 1 year ago

Another gem. To paraphrase an old country song I heard long ago. I’ve got tears in my ears as I lie on my back in my bed as I cry after reading this marvelous story Thank you.

Busman19639Busman1963912 months ago

A nice happy ending for two people who got shit on by their spouses.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman6 months ago

sweet. another "Lifetime Movie plot"

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lovely story. Pity they didn't get together sooner. But they did get there and that is the important point. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A little short, but still very good.

oldpantythiefoldpantythief25 days ago

Wonderful story, so glad that they took the chance and finally found each other. Had to chuckle at the last where much to the exs consternation the grandkids called Brit Grandmom. Serves the ex right for being such a cunt.

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