All Comments on 'I Know Who You Are'

Too short, resolved too quickly, the most interesting interaction was off screen

Enjoyed it apart from the wrapping up in 2 short paragraphs. Felt rushed

a little quick to the end.

I look forward to the Valentine Day contest all year, to read stories exactly like this. Thanks so much for writing!

Yes....

Especially loved the call out to Meat Loaf. Would like to see this continue.

Great story. I appreciated the Meat Loaf easter egg, whether the timing was planned or not.

A great story and it's certainly set up for a second chapter where he meets "Daddy"

What a sweet wonderful tune.

Great story!

5

A short - sweet beginning of a romance for V-Day! Smith needs to meet Daddy!

***** stars!

Burninglove

Really good story. Loved every word and you painted the characters beautifully.

Predictable

Another fun story. Thanks

Very, very good! Loved reading it! Thank-you

I loved this. Great Meat Loaf reference too. He will be missed.

5*

I liked it! Story spun out smoothly and felt right. Characters came across as believable. One of my favorite stories you have written. Thank You!

WONDERFUL! I'd like to see another part where Teagan gives Smith something to write about, a new beautiful wife and beautiful children and have his daughter, when she gets older still call him, DADDY. He finally found someone that truly loved him and I guarantee she'd scratch Lindsay's eyes out, if she hurt the future father to her children...

Liked it very much. Loved the pace and witty banter. A fun read!

I agree this definitely warrants more chapters

Too bad this is a contest submittal! As I remember they are one offs by the rules. This story begs for a second or maybe third chapter but then again let them go. I am sure you have more interesting characters and fantasies to introduce and entertain your fans with. Looking forward to your next.

Cheers

SAGE

More!!!!!

Wow this could definitely use another chapter. It’s just that good 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great job! Loved Teagan’s attitude, her drive, and her ability to turn his comment to her advantage. Glad for the happy ending, too. Excellent work!

This one is different but liked, 5 Stars!

The prose equivalent of the C Major>G Major>A Minor>F Major chord progression. Every plot turn is predictable.

Ended too abruptly. The whole story was about Smith's turmoil, you need to flesh out the end with some better explanation of how he dumped the Lindsay fucking Taylor baggage.

A very good story but I wanted more in the end.

I agree with the others - I wanted more. Of course, that's how a great writer leaves his readers...5*

Is the word "delightful" a little over the top? Nah! Teagan is quite delightful. Smith has a new, worthy muse.

I’d have loved more at the end. It feels like you built all of this up and then just stopped mid note.

Oh boy, he didn't stand a chance once Tegan had decided. Loved their interchanges but a little disappointed we didn't know what happened with Lindsey but perhaps that might have affected the excitement of that part. It was short and sweet, very sweet, and ideal for a contest. Perhaps you've left it open for a sequel.

As per normal, you write good stuff...........

second time through it. enjoyed it as much as the first time

And? ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

A lot of us guys need a woman like Teagan, no games or hurt in her just honesty and a loveable assertiveness. Good story.............

I'd like to see more on this story

Definitely would like to see more.

Boring

This story hits all the right notes for me.

Great story. Flows nicely and while being quite short, is nicely ended.

The end was too fucking abrupt....after all the emotional build up to the reader, it just fizzles out, no fucking explanation, nothing

Good story, though the ending seemed incomplete.

Agree with others,the ending is a bit abrupt.

Arggg! The confrontation would be nice to have but I understand the writer it would be a repetition off was built during the tale

Good story, but it's missing the confrontation & an epilog. It seems like he reached closure, but US readers don't get the closure. Otherwise, a good story.

Fantastic and I get the point of the whole story and I’m not American I gave it a five

Bh76, you have skill as a storyteller. Your readers are all the better for it!

If I had any complaint at all, it was that the story was too short and we were just getting to know these rich characters.

This is not your usual fare, your other stories have an inter connectivity to them, but all in all, another good yarn, with lots of potential for more chapters

It feels like the author is lazy, nearly all stories end far too quickly or lack an epilogue and large parts are either missing or the characters are emotionally changed like that(clicks finger dramatically), but seriously you have so much potential but you repeat the same let downs in nearly all your stories.

ROTFLMAO…If you think this author is “lazy”….don’t read anything by one of this site’s most venerated writers: Just Plain Bob.

Funny story…loved the way the MC redirected the guy by finishing all his sentences.

Loved the story, but the title needs work. May I suggest 'God damned Lindsay Taylor'. Just my opinion. 5 stars.

I get it’s your story and it is a good fun short. So much left for more chapters to make it great one, for that gave it a four for the let down with the ending.

It needed at least 5-6 pages for all the cramped timeline and the story felt rushed and there was no emotion and attraction between the characters

Too fucking rushed

Yes, exactly what I thought, title should be GD Lindsay Taylor! Enjoyed it, especially Teagan.