All Comments on 'I Know Who You Did Last Summer Ch. 01'

I like the overall idea of the story.

The execution feels immature. There are too many sentences repeated "I <did this>..." or "<qualifier> I <did this>...", where it could have been written with the description of the situation first and attributed to the person after, just to help remove so many "I ..." sentences.

It would have been nice to have had some more coloring of our two main characters. Some more personality and physical enrichment of them in the story...

Here's hoping that this is like the pilot of a TV series where the writers are just figuring it out and the plot and characters ripen like a fine cheese as the story progresses.

Wonderful story. The check marks were a little out of reach for me especially while having sex - not a complaint - just my thoughts. But it did provide a nice way to track the orgasms! Overall it was an exhilarating experience and reaffirms the beauty, power and delight of holding the reins of control over someone as well as the excitement of being controlled. Loved the story! Makes me want to go back to school!

Great story. But you have to admit it was weird having him riding his bike home and back in a graduation gown while nude underneath and then chilling in the stall for 25 minutes

One of my best favorites !

Couple of times a year I find myself coming back to read these, great stories, thanks for the hours (literally ;) ) of self abuse material :)

Sorry but I have already read this whole thing before. So now I am rereading it. I hope you have more to the story past. Chapter 9. I would love to read more

nice story.

but still some typing errors, spelling and grammar mistakes.

I had a couple of problems though. I would have found it a little more believable if she had resisted more. Someone being blackmailed is going to be a little more resistant. And the most important thing, what is her motivation to comply with the blackmail if it is essentially his word against hers? She's not going to be dismissed from school or lose her marriage on the word of a high school senior without any other evidence.

That being said, the story was very erotic. It would be great if the author would write a couple of more chapters to tell us more about what happens with Stephani after Chapter 8, and what happens with Val, Trista, Trista's mom, and Rebecca? (the bitchy friend). It definitely seems like you were setting the story for Justin to do something with the bitchy friend, since her house is connected by tunnels to the church too.

you built up the tension exquisitely.

This seemed exactly like what a high school boy would write. All about them. Very unrealistic sex, though not impossible. Fun.

Thank you soooooooo much for writing this story for us!

YOMEO

Fun filled teacher fantasy! You may want to use spell check and proof read otherwise a great story

couldn't get past the first couple of paragraphs... juvenile and very dull.

That was fantastic - thanks so much.

Every paragraph was exciting.

Perhaps you should have studied when and when not to use apostrophes instead of fucking your teacher.

U need help with grammar etc.

Great premise.

One of the best.

Five stars.

I loved this story, but I think you should have left out all the "check marks"...it was distracting.

Great, well written, exciting even for a jaded mind