All Comments on 'I Love You FCSK 12712'

Very, very clever, and highly erotic. I loved it. I guessed a part of it fairly early on, but the twist in the "tale" completely eluded me until the end.

the story was exelent. i have been waiting for some time for a story like this one and it lived up to my expectations. of course this story does raise importent questions on the nature of sex and the value of love.

wow. awesome story.

Very good spacy fantasy and very well written!

Beautifully written, and very well plotted. I liked it that I thought I knew what the twist was, until the second twist, and then the last part was a real surprise. Great stuff!

This is some good erotic sci-fi, hot, sensual and a good story.

awesomely sexy, with elaborately choreographed scenes. Loved the twist at the end. a great read through out

Hot, enjoyable, witty. It's now one of my favorite. The story flowed so smoothly that one might be tempted to think it was an easy one to write. In my opinion this is the biggest compliment you can get.

Excellent work Mabeuse. I hope you write more sci-fi.

Well written, got kinda urple in some parts, like describing Brie. But it had a great plot, nice little twist at the end.

Well written stuff... loved how it ended to boot!

This was the first time I've been on this site that I was at a loss for words. The twist was excellent! Great writing style with just the right amount of technical jargon to give the piece credibility. I'm sure to check out other works by the good doctor.

This was a fantastic read. Thank you very much!

I, for one, did not like the ending. Brie being human was obvious from the start, but Bram as an android doesn't really fit with the rest of the story. He has too many human characteristics that aren't compatible with the story's version of androids/gynoids. It was good until the end, though.

loved the twist....totally got hot throughout the story. well done. :)

I love this story ..... so funny to read and such fun..... and the ending was great .....

I loved this - you have a wonderful sense of humor. But replaceable hymen had me laughing out loud.

I guessed almost immediately that Brie was a real woman, but I never suspected Bram, himself. Double fake-out; nice job. Entertaining story, too. For some reason, I couldn't stop seeing an odd combination of KOS-MOS and the series "Chobits" the whole time I was reading this...

have to say i totally saw the "the gynoid isn't actually the gynoid" bit coming, didn't exactly think it was a swap for the Pres of the company, and i totally did not see the "Bram North is an Android too" part coming. total surprise. good writing, nice twists, keep up the good work.

This was the best it fooled me

SUS?

Dread it, run from it, Anogus arrives all the same.

Wow. That was a damn good story. Five stars it is.