All Comments on 'I Love You, Mom'

This definitely needs a sequel

start to the seduction of his Mom - I look forward to chapter 2

More....more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

First off, if Literotica got their shit together and added comments to the Literotica Android app myself and many more in the community would comment much more often, as the app is the way I've read the stories for 2 or 3 years now.

I say this because a great story like Alexis' should be rated higher and have the chance to be. I had to go old school and log onto the website to comment, something I don't do very often (even as the Critic Laureate of Literotica). The writing here is like The Graduate or something of that ilk; so sharp, descriptive and full of interesting plot points. Such a pleasure to read a taboo story with more than the standard tropes & monosyllabical dialog. Extremely interested in reading more in this series or new stories from Alexis. Brilliant.

Every event in the story is so real. Loved mom covered son's hard on when dad got home then went upstairs to dad. More mothers should show such love.

Please keep continuing this story PLEASE!

What grabbed me was the use of the word calmity. I love good writing by authors can truly wordsmith. Looking forward to reading more from you.

At last, an author who's skilled in the use of the English language. I noticed your deft turn of phrase. There's nothing overblown here. Subtlety rules, as it should in erotic literature (just my opinion). Subtle is sexy. What's more, this is a wholly believable story. Nice work.

I would like to thank everyone who has supported this story, either by commenting on it, providing feedback, adding it to your favorites, or any number of other things. I want you to know that I read all the comments and feedback, and while I couldn't respond to everyone individually, I am grateful to those who took time out of their day to show some love. (I know it might be a bit tacky for a writer to comment on their own story, but I really wanted to let you guys know that I appreciate you).

I'm hoping you take your time with this one, we get so many rushed stories on here. You did great with chapter 1. I'm hoping or some voyeurism, some more awkward moments, seduction, etc. Keep going at the current pace!

love the story .. looking forward to reading part 2

This was truly a very erotic story and realistic. The ending was perfect to allow us to wonder how erotic the next sequence will be. Please don't keep us waiting long.

Great story. I can't wait to read the next part. You've really got me interested so don't take too long. Lol

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