by KatPissinger
I find your writing style interesting, more compressed than I generally like my prose. Yet your story seems to convey the essence of a stolen rendezvous, that is, unplanned, rushed, spontaneous, open, revealing.
Since this is the first story I've ready of yours, I can't wait to read others.
5 stars. This is a succinct short story; a concise writing. The majority of the stories I really enjoy on this website are well written, short and to the point, making the most of each word.
I want more pages and chapters of this story. I want to know if she made Martina into a complete Toilet Slave by making her eat her Mistress' Shit/Scat as well as drinking her Mistress' Piss for the rest of her lifetime or not; as well as; other dirty things.
Not much into golden showers but ths was kinda hot
What about those teenage girls tho?