All Comments on 'I Think I'm Ready'

make it not the end!!!

Paused brilliantly, but not ended, I trust. However, you have crafted the characters and emotions so well that we can imagine some delicious ways forward.

I hope you get to the juicy part in the next chapter.

Your creative detail leaves me wanting to have the same level of description as she properly submits for the first time. I think the mother should inform the daughter about the ideal man she submits to and have him take the daughter (his wife) submit while blind folded and have her orally pleasing her mother then they 69 each other on his command. Now the daughter finds out she have the massive cock and submit too as she always wanted. Just a few suggestions but I am sure from this chapter, you quite have it in you...

I actually thought the same thing when she called him & was so cryptic.....he’s going to think Joanie is back. She (the mother-in-law) totally misread the situation & they were on completely different wavelengths.

TAlk about "Leaving us Hanging"..!!!

Waiting breathlessly for the next installment..!!!

PLEASE.... MORE..!!

Leave us hanging!

Do u like this u 8===D

You missed the point , Get her sex with him and then add the daughter in.

I hope you develop this into a series.

Wasn't something ment to actually happen or did I miss that bit.

Much more please.

great build up and then the ending was disappointing...would have liked to have seen a chance to continue story..e215

I’m hoping that you intend on a chapter 2 (or more) for this story, if so then that was a great place to end chapter 1, if not then the story is lacking a Conclusion!

You have got to finish this story the build up is amazing

I had a surprisingly similar situation happen to me in real life. Your story was amazing, vivid and seductive. I await the next part to see how things turn out. Please don't keep me waiting !

Not bad but you need to finish the story, then I’ll vote

Fantastic! The buildup was, simultaneously, erotic and brutal.

I'd like to see more of this story, its a great beginning.

I did not like it but very little ..2 stars!

No ending no vote sorry.