All Comments on 'I Thought I Hated Him Ch. 04'

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I hope your vacation gives you many inspirations for the rest of this wonderful story. At least, I hope you had a good time.

Im really enjoying this story, its intruiging.

amazing. It's been quite a while since I've read work by an author of your skill and caliber. My only complaint is that Daniel keeps raising one eyebrow way too much...I counted and it was like 10 or 11 times in the last four chapters, at which point it stops being a personality quirk and becomes an annoying habit. But that's just me. Thank you, and I hope you continue to write!

I loved it. That pretty much sums it up. I can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks

With due respect to the Colonel, that was finger-lickin' good. Thank you, firstkiss, for a smokin' hot read. I look forward to the next chapter.

Agree with the rest of your fans!

I love this story and the characters. Looking forward to more chapters! Keep up the great writing!

I am really enjoying this story !!! I think it needs more, many more, chapters!!!!!

YES - KEEP IT COMING - GOOD WRITING, SYNTAX - STRUCTURE. PERHAPS AN ADDITIONAL CHARACTER; A SON OR DAUGHTER COULD BE ADDED.

....absolutely delicious....a real feel good, hot story. Thanks for another good read!

I really have enjoyed (and do enjoy) this great piece of writing you've started. As everyone else has already said you're an incredible writer with fresh plot ideas, proper English usage, and hot sex. I love this and would love it if you would write more of Daniel and Clara's story. Thanks.

i can't wait for the next chapter !!!i hope there are going to be many many many more chapters

That was probably the best story I've read so far on this site! Please keep adding more chapters to this story! You obviously have a lot of fans. I love it when Daniel describes what he wants to do to her! So freakin hot!!! And your description of Daniel is just like the man of my dreams! Ahhh!! You're so awesome!!

We're waiting for it!!!

The new story is great, but this one needs at least one more chapter...I would love to read about a long, lingering session in bed with Daniel.

... he's so real! Thank you for Daniel, he will be in my dreams for a very long time, can't wait for the next chapter...

Amazing story.

Your characters just get better and better. If only I could transform one of your male characters into flesh and blood....my life would be complete. Daniel is so sexy and real! Excellent job!!!

This chapter was so damned good it actually made me laugh

in triumph for the author who wrote it. Being a man, I must say I adore the incredible redhead Daniel is after. "Clara" or "claret??" So utterly intoxicating! Wow, she is one whole lot of woman!! I know I could be my best "Daniel" for her!! I loved her. He is well spoken for by the women who have commented. I would insist that she seems so far to be every bit his equal!

By far the best-written, most erotic and entirely believable story in this site. The fact they had wonderful sex without the necessity of oral/genital contact was great--way too many authors make that almost a pre-requisite in their stories nowadays, and it most certainly is not.

I never get tired to read this story! I just love it!!

...though I don't remember just who, that there was no such thing as really "bad" sex, if the sex was between two people who desparately wanted the other...Sometimes it's just another ritual in an otherwise hum-drum existance...When it just HAS to happen...life is just soooo much more interesting...

Or thats a personal favorite of yours. If not, im gonna find you and give you a hug

I've read endless chapters of so called "erotic" literature on here from short stories to books .Many far more direct and blatant, but this is truly one of the hottest,passionate and most realistic I've ever read .Superb.

Very well written and I absolutely love the chemistry between characters!

aliens from a different world?

corny, i thought - can't explain it...

iĺl still read it, though not fascinated...